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Into the Vapenouz Woods of Voroznezh

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"Has solitude ever led your steps down a forest path . . . " Quote by Constance La France Into the vapenouz woods of Voroznezh befooled by the curvenouzh, twistezh woodwayl Wandered witlezh in frenzhied askewness lozhing my witzh in a labyrzhthine mazhe Emergent in shzadoz a carnozhine Bedlamizh gormlizh and gruezhome, ghazhtly and ghozhtly mezhugga, wizhered, zhomewhat confuzhed Geozhationary, zhtrange, it zhtood in zhe way “I’m lozht,” I lamenzted in a zhin, zhaky voice He bluzhtered and dizhered in unuzhal zhtyle Zhen zhuprizhingly pointing in farzhical pozhe “Eazh- Veszh is zhe way to your fazhaway home. 2. Quote #2 - Inspiration with a theme of - Nature WRITING CHALLENGE - ''V'' Forms Poetry Contest Sponsored by Constance La France Written 11/16/22

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/26/2022 4:15:00 PM

Ha, ha, ha! I actually know that place (and the half the words that go with it). It's in the Ukraine somewhere. lol.

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 12/26/2022 5:01:00 PM

Thanks Gershon…Lol yezth. My accent is zthowing. SuZ

Gary Radice

Date: 12/12/2022 1:41:00 AM

I'm not sure if I should be worried or not because I understood it all - despite vogon poetry being the third worst in the universe. Mr J. B. Wocky would be proud SuZ. Cheers - Gary

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 12/12/2022 6:03:00 AM

Ha ha Wanting to be different sure leads you down unexpected pathways. Thanks for your welcome visit, Gary. SuZ

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 12/8/2022 12:18:00 PM

Lovely pen SuZ with nice imagery and expression penned. Blessings,Gordon

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 12/9/2022 5:26:00 AM

Thanks so much, Gordon: Your visit and comment are very appreciated. SuZ

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/4/2022 2:47:00 AM

Back with congratulations on your winner in Constance's contest. Way to go. Sara

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 12/9/2022 5:28:00 AM

Thanks, Sara: I appreciate your Congrats. SuZ

Constance La France

Date: 11/29/2022 1:57:00 PM

Suzanne, a very interesting form, I must try to write one. Congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge V Forms inspired by my quote, well done, blessings

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 12/4/2022 7:58:00 AM

Hi Constance: thank you for your kind words and my placement in your contest. I have escaped the winter to Siesta Key and not online much. Hope you try this form sometime…..it is another zone all together. Lol. SuZ

Suzette Richards

Date: 11/23/2022 9:49:00 PM

I am back again to say Congratulations. It seems that we are the brave ones, lol.

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 12/4/2022 8:00:00 AM

I agree and I thought I had replied to your message, Su: We are back online but been busy settling into Siesta Key. LuV, SuZ

Harry Horsman

Date: 11/20/2022 11:33:00 PM

This is all new to me. Suzanne, always willing to learn though, and yes so clever you are, on this creative poetry, and didn't need a looking glass neither. Love it.

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 12/4/2022 7:55:00 AM

Glad you enjoyed this one, Harry: My method for writing this was to get a wordlist of adjectives and basically alter them into a kind of Jabberwocky story. A fun exercise. Hope you’re well. SuZ

Suzette Richards

Date: 11/17/2022 11:43:00 PM

Ztupendouslishes!!! Love your take on the form and had a good giggle. Good luck in the contest. :))

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 11/18/2022 3:42:00 AM

Ha ha Suzette: Happy it gave you a good giggle. Thanks for the good luck wishes. I might need them. Lol SuZ

Hat Bueckert

Date: 11/17/2022 7:20:00 AM

Zhimply fabulouzh Suzanne! I love this, Good luck to you in the contest!

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 11/17/2022 5:14:00 PM

Thanks Hat:Glad it gave you a moment of escape…lol SuZ

Charles Messina

Date: 11/17/2022 3:34:00 AM

At first when I read it fast, I thought this was another unknown language to me (lol) After taking my time reading it a second time, it's written brilliantly, Suz. Love the story too! Best wishes in the contest...Charlie

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 11/17/2022 5:51:00 AM

Thanks Charlie: Once I got into the ‘zone,’ came fairly easily. I appreciate you reading and commenting. ..SuZ

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/17/2022 12:51:00 AM

Creative way to go. Reminds me of "The Big Bang Theory". Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 11/17/2022 5:52:00 AM

Thanks so much Sara, for your valued comment. Have a wonderful day. Hugs, SuZ

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/16/2022 1:06:00 PM

I don't know anything about Vogon but to me this seemed like Little Red Riding Hood and the wolf!! Cool writing!

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 11/16/2022 4:37:00 PM

Thanks Andrea: Jabberwocky from Through the Looking Glass /Alice in Wonderland by Lewis Carrol, was one of the first word nonsense poems. Vogons, who are a fictional alien race from the planet Vogsphere in the Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy we’re the first one’s responsible for horrible poems. Try it. SuZ

L Milton Hankins

Date: 11/16/2022 10:03:00 AM

Extra, extra fine writing, Suz. Not many of us can write convincing Vogon, but you certainly can! I thoroughly enjoyed reading and deciphering your lines. BofL in the contest.

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 11/16/2022 10:32:00 AM

I really appreciate these words, Milt, ….from someone as prolific as you are with writing poetry. I have always wanted to attempt a Jabberwocky style poem but this is my first time finishing one. No longer a VOGON virgin….LOL SuZ

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/16/2022 8:47:00 AM

Very creative Suz, you rose well to the challenge of the contest. Good luck. Tom

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 11/16/2022 10:33:00 AM

How lovely to get your comment today, Tom: ……always feels good to try a challenge and have fun with the outcome. Best, SuZ