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Into the Sunset

Showing the colours of your life Unknown parts make up its collusion Newness of life's fading into oblivion Shining as yellow orange and red Everyone has this nighttime blend Tomorrow it will arise again Thoughts of today mixes with desires Here they blend with memories Every night slightly different sighs Each of us love the sunset show Nightly goodbyes to daily thoughts. Delighting you deep within you now Only to arise with new vigour For you to fill with thoughts again Darkness with Aura of light enclosing Yesterday's dreams Penned 6th May 2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/17/2014 2:10:00 PM
Dear Seren, It's amazing how well this acrostic flows. It is filled with uplifting moments and a bit of sadness at the end. Awesome work! Congratulations on your win! Carolyn
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Date: 5/16/2014 2:56:00 PM
Congratulations, Seren. Lovely poem.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 5/16/2014 3:50:00 PM
thank you Faye ....Seren
Date: 5/16/2014 5:30:00 AM
Lovely write Seren ! Congrats on such a merited huge win !
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Seren Roberts
Date: 5/16/2014 9:26:00 AM
Thankyou....Seren
Date: 5/16/2014 4:26:00 AM
Seren so lovely ty for your support congrats on win hugs
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Seren Roberts
Date: 5/16/2014 9:27:00 AM
Thank you Shadow, I am glad you liked it....Seren
Date: 5/9/2014 9:30:00 AM
Quite a unique take on the theme of the contest, seren
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Seren Roberts
Date: 5/9/2014 9:50:00 AM
hmmm not sure if thats good or bad lol ....Seren
Date: 5/9/2014 1:55:00 AM
Taking what we learn with each new gifted sunrise & sunset...absorbing that into our soul for sanity's sake. Excellent!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 5/16/2014 9:27:00 AM
thank you Drake ...Seren

Book: Shattered Sighs