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Into the Sunlight

Like Icarus I spread my wings To rise on rainbows; my heart sings The magic of this sunset grows From amber, lilac, then to rose As I approach the sun, I vow To see the colors clearer now With heavens kissed by gold and pink The sun hangs low, begins to sink The hues that caught my naïve eye All start to pale, though fast I fly While brighter colors fade from view Below the Earth grows darker too For who am I to catch the sun Our race is done; the sun has won
*Written May 13, 2014 *In Greek Mythology, Icarus’s father made wings for him, but he flew too close to the Sun.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/19/2014 12:54:00 PM
I really enjoyed your beautiful descriptions of the colors as they changed.... This poem flows just wonderfully, Carolyn. A truly lovely write! Congratulations on your well deserved win!
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Date: 5/18/2014 10:54:00 AM
Hi Carolyn, Congrats. This is a wonderfully worded piece of artistry. Well done. Theresa xx
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Date: 5/17/2014 10:05:00 AM
Oh, Carolyn, so melancholy, so beautiful.....and as always, uniquely your own! This is a deserving win! :)
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Date: 5/16/2014 10:57:00 PM
I love this one and I once wrote a sonnet too about this same subject (but it did not involve rainbows) That was a great touch. Congrats on your super win.
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Date: 5/16/2014 6:25:00 PM
I love this poem Carolyn; it's going into my favs. :) congrats on a deserved win. // paul
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Date: 5/16/2014 3:35:00 PM
Beautiful write wonderful, congrats on your win! Love Always, Keith :-)
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Date: 5/16/2014 2:52:00 PM
Really enjoyed reading this, Carolyn; I love your writing style. Congratulations!
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Date: 5/16/2014 5:25:00 AM
Wow Carolyn it's amazing ! What a beautiful pic u hv painted ! Congrats on huge win !
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Date: 5/16/2014 4:22:00 AM
Carolyn so nice to see your poem heading my list ty for your support congrats on win hugs
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Date: 5/13/2014 1:12:00 PM
Gosh, beautiful...just beautiful. BG
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Date: 5/13/2014 9:50:00 AM
You can have a new race again tomorrow...Wonderful and delightfully descriptive...You have a beautiful pen Carolyn....Hugs Tim
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Date: 5/13/2014 7:23:00 AM
Beautiful poem - fantastic imagery! Well done!
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