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Into the Sunlight

It is the divine time again, where my eyes gain an opportunity to see the sky fiery, as though the sun has poured its energy on the stars, causing a fiery reaction that is beautiful, and doesn't burn...... Date:06/06/2014

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Date: 5/17/2014 2:19:00 PM
Hi Teddy, Such a unique perspective you have here. As children, we are always told not to stare into the sun. When it's setting, though, it's hard to turn away. Beautifully composed. Congratulations on your win! Carolyn
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 5/19/2014 3:59:00 AM
Thanks for your applause Carolyne! You remind me of sweet childhood days! ^_^
Date: 5/16/2014 3:41:00 PM
Beautiful! Congratulations, Teddy.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 5/17/2014 5:37:00 AM
I appreciate you praise Faye! Thank you very much! ^_^
Date: 5/16/2014 9:06:00 AM
Neat! Congrats on your win Teddy. BG
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 5/17/2014 5:35:00 AM
Thank you so much Barbara! ^_^
Date: 5/16/2014 5:32:00 AM
Sweet write Teddy n congrats on merited great win !
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 5/17/2014 5:34:00 AM
Thank you very much for your kind words and applause Dr. Upma! ^_^
Date: 5/16/2014 4:34:00 AM
Teddy lovely poem ty for your support congrats on win hugs
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 5/16/2014 5:05:00 AM
Thank you very much Shadow Hamilton! You are a great source of morale support too! <3 <3 ^_^

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