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Into the Sunlight

Glorious brace glow from beams of shine Yellow orange peeps streaming strip lines Darkness disbands eaten by the sunset Conjuring baby blossoms to life's sweat Graciously drowning beating the twilight Waving hope to a spick-and-span fright My shining star, healing my aged scars Into the sunlight, my knight on sight New dreams burst jar, allowing spar Top of the world, I find and whirled Into the sunlight, spirits wake sprite White no more tars, breaking all bars Glorious brace glow from beams of shine My shining star, healing my aged scars (c) Olive ELoisa May 09, 2014 2:53pm Contest Name: Into the Sunset Sponsor: Shadow Hamilton 8th place, Praise God! :)

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Date: 5/19/2014 9:42:00 AM
yes!.. you're on a roll, olive.. huge congrats.. huggs
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Date: 5/22/2014 5:25:00 AM
thanks much Nette.. :) really appreciate you drop by.. :D
Date: 5/17/2014 2:25:00 PM
Ah, Olive, if only a new car could heal aged scars, we'd be young forever. What a beautiful sonnet! Congratulations on your win! Carolyn
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Date: 5/18/2014 2:38:00 AM
Thanks very much Carolyn..:) our hearts can forever be young..:)
Date: 5/16/2014 8:00:00 PM
As Paul said: "And back again....weeeee!!! Congratulations:)))"
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Date: 5/18/2014 2:45:00 AM
Thanks much Ivo :)
Date: 5/16/2014 12:20:00 PM
And back again....weeeee!!! Congratulations:)))
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Date: 5/18/2014 2:45:00 AM
Thanks Paul :) GBu
Date: 5/16/2014 4:39:00 AM
Olive an enchanting poem ty for your support congrats on win hugs
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Date: 5/18/2014 2:38:00 AM
Thanks very much Shadow for giving me a place :) GBU
Date: 5/15/2014 4:30:00 AM
awesome write, love it
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Date: 5/17/2014 6:21:00 AM
thanks much.. :)
Date: 5/12/2014 12:08:00 AM
Good :) :) :) :) :) :) Wishes-Saba!
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/12/2014 7:28:00 AM
thanks much SAba >>:)
Date: 5/9/2014 4:37:00 PM
Praise to you wonder girl! This is so beautiful. You keep raising the bar up. Olive_eloi enjoying the sunlight:) // paul
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/9/2014 4:50:00 PM
Thanks much Paul..:) GBU and hugs..:) weeeee your much appreciated..:)
Date: 5/9/2014 12:24:00 PM
You left me speechless after reading this poem... This is awe to the highest level..!!! wonderful write as always..:O))
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/9/2014 4:51:00 PM
Thanks much Aiyah.. Happy to see you stop by.. GBU sweets..:)
Date: 5/9/2014 10:59:00 AM
Beautiful writing beautiful girl. Your words are magical. Well done and good luck :)
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Date: 5/9/2014 4:52:00 PM
Thank you Casarah.. Your more beautiful than this one..:)

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