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Into the Passion

The wind is blowing And here, my skin is showing Standing in the heat Air rushing into weak pores I relish in the passion
Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/26/2012 5:18:00 PM
Russell, a nice sounding tanka,,,feels really smooth....always~PD
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Date: 8/26/2012 1:04:00 PM
clever write, my friend
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Date: 8/26/2012 10:54:00 AM
Interesting description of passion, my friend.
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Date: 8/25/2012 9:21:00 PM
Good descriptive tanka for summer.
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