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Into the Ocean Soup

With tiny timid staggering steps I traverse, Through a gate amid howling ocean of readings, A whirly wind ringing rhymes of diverse, Helps the ocean waves bringing tome of meanings. Woven are these pages in poetic verse, With bare threads of our deepest feelings, You will find laughter, tears and remorse and words of wisdom, prayer and healings. With throbbing heart, through the book in gaited horse, Wandered, wondering mastery of poetic ceilings, Burning my passion, poesy angels appeared in disperse, Offering tortie trinkets and helping hands in my dealings. Date of Entry : 20/04/20 Contest : 'Poetry Anthology add your stanza' Contest Sponsor : Krish Radhakrishna

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Date: 5/3/2020 11:31:00 AM
you rhymed so beautifully to weave your poem in with Krish's lines many congrats Jenish:-) hugs Jan xx
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/4/2020 12:06:00 AM
Thank you Jan for your delightful comment..
Date: 5/2/2020 6:34:00 PM
Jenish, very impressive win, congratulations. I like how you rhymed, especially with the italicized stanza. Some nice images; howling ocean and gaited horse. Well done ~ John
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/4/2020 12:05:00 AM
Thank you John..I took it wrong..
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John Watt
Date: 5/3/2020 2:00:00 AM
I meant to compliment you for rhyming your final stanza with the rhyming words from Krish's stanza. It gave a nice continuity.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/2/2020 11:51:00 PM
Thank you John..I redirect your appreciation to Krish, since he wrote that beautiful letters in italics..
Date: 5/2/2020 1:15:00 PM
Superb! Congrats on your win! This was a difficult contest to judge because of the quality of poems that were submitted. I blew a kiss in to thin air, when I read yours! That charming!
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/2/2020 11:47:00 PM
Thank you Krish..Thank you so much for bringing this mind blowing contest which helped me to think something different..
Date: 4/22/2020 9:03:00 PM
A Beautiful Poem, passionate and wonderous thought-provoking a Fav for me... Good luck with the contest.....
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/22/2020 11:37:00 PM
Thank you Shirley..You made my day bright with that Fav.. Takecare always..
Date: 4/21/2020 2:19:00 AM
I adore this poem and especially this part: "A whirly wind ringing rhymes of diverse, Helps the ocean waves bringing tome of meanings." Wow!
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/21/2020 6:31:00 AM
Thank you Caren for that delightful comment..Takecare always...
Date: 4/20/2020 7:31:00 AM
Lovely lines Jenish--you complement the theme well.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/20/2020 8:03:00 AM
Thank you Vijay for your support and delightful comment..Takecare..
Date: 4/20/2020 5:13:00 AM
A superb poem with fine alliterative parts and said in great rhyme scheme, a fine add to the ocean of poetry. Kudos. Pls do read and comment my newest poem too.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/20/2020 5:38:00 AM
Thank you Zaynab for your delightful comment.. Yes, I will check for sure..Takecare..
Date: 4/20/2020 1:22:00 AM
You and Krish cooked up a potent dish! Very tasty! :) gw
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/20/2020 2:01:00 AM
Thank you Gershon for your kind words..Takecare..

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