Into the Night

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Into the night The pen or the knife Wine or cheesy reality Dancing with the devil Delectable choices Divine voices Inside my head Sadness mounts her horse Decisions and predilections The pen or the knife? Do I even have a choice?

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/11/2016 9:02:00 PM

stream of consciousness technique, arthur... striking!..hugggs

Jan Allison

Date: 9/11/2016 1:39:00 PM

Grab a glass, pick up your pen - your writes are dark, never cheesy not like mine!:-) hugs Jan xx

Jean Murray

Date: 9/11/2016 1:06:00 PM

Well, with wine inside, the muse decides to speak.....don't you think?

Tim Smith

Date: 9/11/2016 8:39:00 AM

First slice up the cheese so we can enjoy it with the wine. We'll have a few laughs and then write about it.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/11/2016 7:35:00 AM

The pen is stronger than the sword anytime...In your case the Knife : ).

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/11/2016 6:17:00 AM

- For some a difficult choice ...... deep and great written, Arthur - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Probir Gupta

Date: 9/11/2016 5:45:00 AM

Nice ... Either may do ... So no need of choice ... beautiful shadows ... half dark half light ... a brown-blue-pungent sight ...

Eileen Manassian

Date: 9/11/2016 3:11:00 AM

PLEASE....the pen. Need you around, my dear. Deep write....one I can really connect with. Hugs