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Into the Night

Into The Night the mad train rolls on Trying to outrun the unbearable past Into the blackness my hopes are cast Grasping for memories, time is gone Holding on tight as it rounds the bend No answers to the questions asked Into The Night Life and death are the raven's spawn No longer dreams of life held fast Closing this sorrowful book at last The velvet curtain is slowly drawn Into The Night Barbara Gorelick 7/19/12 Traffic of Life-Rondine

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Date: 8/2/2012 11:22:00 PM
Congrats Barbara!
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Date: 8/2/2012 6:53:00 PM
Beautifully wrought. congratulations on your first place win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/1/2012 11:56:00 PM
Barbara ;-) congratulations with your awesome win in Nette's,, traffic contest... xox~PD
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Date: 8/1/2012 7:44:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Nette's "The Traffic Of Life" contest Barbara. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/1/2012 7:40:00 PM
A deep poem here Barbara.Love it!Congrats on the win!
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Date: 8/1/2012 3:11:00 PM
Barbara congrats on your win...bit spooky..David
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Date: 8/1/2012 3:08:00 PM
Wonderful and very creative write,Barbara...Congratulations on your superb win...Kudos to you...
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Date: 8/1/2012 10:59:00 AM
Pretty scary! Congrad's on your fine write winning! Light & Love
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Date: 8/1/2012 8:21:00 AM
the flow and mood just goes on and on, barbara.. congrats on your top win in my contest!.:) huggs
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Date: 8/1/2012 8:00:00 AM
Congrats on your fantastic win, Barbara! Love and Blessings :))
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Date: 8/1/2012 7:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Barbara xx
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Date: 8/1/2012 5:47:00 AM
congrats BG on a super first place win for this incredible write luv..
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