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Into the Ground

I sat in my head For so long it did seem Sat in a well Drowning in a dream A dream of what was Lost and once found Time after time, I ran myself into the ground

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Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 10/12/2016 11:34:00 PM

Its all in the head...well done! :)

Tyler King
Date: 10/14/2016 3:59:00 PM

Thank you!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/11/2016 11:08:00 AM

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Tyler King
Date: 10/14/2016 4:00:00 PM

THank you!

Clara Bereuter

Date: 10/10/2016 8:05:00 AM

I see why they featured it. It encompasses a lot of feeling just in 8 lines.

Tyler King
Date: 10/14/2016 3:59:00 PM

It truly came from a deep place of feeling as well.

Manmath Dalei

Date: 10/9/2016 10:14:00 PM

Welcome to Poerty Soup. Good entry with a nice poem. Hope u will enjoy PS very much. Keep on writing..........//:) with love...........//Manmath.........

Tyler King
Date: 10/14/2016 4:00:00 PM

THank you!