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Into the Gloaming

Twilight cast eerie shadows 'pon the tree A lonely tree with frail limbs dark and bare Reaching into dusk with despairing plea Will the sun rise again this anxious year Going into the dark gloaming is scary Twilight of life is an arduous time The setting sun against open field airy Paints a picture of a future sublime Mountains that peek through clouds at setting sun Rocky ragged, difficult heights to scale When hair is white His love has just begun He'll sustain me when my body is frail Into the gloaming glide~ quiet time comes Over the mountains many more lifetimes Finis' Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich Contest: One In Three: Write Beautifully Scripture reference: Isaiah 46:4

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Date: 8/9/2013 7:48:00 PM
Sara, congrats....SKAT
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Date: 8/9/2013 6:43:00 AM
Well done Sara, congratulations.
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Date: 8/9/2013 1:28:00 AM
I love the spiritual message of this one, Sara. Congrats in my contest.
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Date: 8/8/2013 9:58:00 PM
Hello Sara, a very nice win... Linda
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Date: 7/31/2013 4:51:00 AM
This is another of its own kind Sara, I love it BIG!
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Date: 7/30/2013 9:11:00 PM
Twilight cast eerie shadows 'pon the tree...WOW! REMARKABLE LINE! what a joy to read such talent! Sara! Jimbo
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