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Into the Darkness

I watch as the light disappears from you You turn to shadow before my eyes And as you disappear into the darkness I know as you fade away That I can't follow where you go

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/16/2010 9:40:00 PM
Thanks all, I didn't think my poem would get noticed. Keep up the comments :D
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Date: 6/16/2010 11:09:00 AM
Hello Paul: Wonderful poem. There are 2 kinds of darkness. You have captured them both in this poem, fantastic. Yours truly: Sheol
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Date: 6/16/2010 9:16:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Paul. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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