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And in my dream, I am floating into the blue, The calm blue water caresses my tranquility; The vistas are wondrous below the deep misty azure sky, And I am drifting toward a tropical secluded island. And in my dream, I am floating into the blue, Submerged above, below, around in splendor; Then my spirit comes gliding, a lovely white bird hovering, Utterly beautiful my island lush with emerald green. And in my dream, I am floating into the blue, Little fish like gems come to kiss my toes with love; No crashing waves, no sounds, just pure blue stillness, In my dream, I am divine and sublime in a blue fantasy. _______________________________ January 10, 2016 Poetry/Verse/Into The Blue Copyright Protected, ID 16-743-285-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym.

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Date: 1/26/2016 9:53:00 PM
Broken, congrats on your fine win. XOX - LINDA -
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Date: 1/26/2016 9:59:00 PM
Linda, thanks for the congratulations, appreciate
Date: 1/14/2016 9:50:00 PM
Broken Wing, great pen , the imagery is beautiful congratulations on your win!
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Date: 1/15/2016 12:25:00 PM
Eve, thanks so much for visiting my poem and for the beautiful ~
Date: 1/14/2016 9:18:00 PM
Broken, Congrats on your Into The Blue win. ** SKAT **
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Date: 1/15/2016 12:25:00 PM
Thanks
Date: 1/14/2016 7:46:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Broken Wings. Your poem is lovely and filled with dreamy images and fantasy. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/15/2016 12:26:00 PM
Sandra, thanks for visiting my poem and for the lovely and dreamy, appreciate ~
Date: 1/14/2016 7:38:00 PM
So pretty - I love this poem ... CayCay
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Date: 1/15/2016 12:27:00 PM
CayCay, thanks for the love ~
Date: 1/14/2016 7:02:00 PM
Broken Wings, congrats on your placement in the contest :) *Smiles*
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Date: 1/14/2016 7:14:00 PM
Laura, thanks for visiting my poem and for the smiles ~
Date: 1/11/2016 6:21:00 PM
into the deep....parts of my mind we meet....these words and my heart....the musing effect starts....the wheel slowly begins to turn....while passion endlessly burns....inspiration has been found....I just Pray I won't let it down....another wow bw....;)
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Date: 1/12/2016 8:34:00 AM
Eric, thank you for the wow, and for the lovely poetic comment, always lovely to have your visit ~
Date: 1/11/2016 12:06:00 PM
Beautiful in theme and execution! Very memorable.
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Date: 1/12/2016 8:35:00 AM
Oddly it just came to me while listening to nature music, I do love nature music mingled with classical
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Date: 1/11/2016 2:46:00 PM
Thomas, thank you so much for visiting
Date: 1/11/2016 9:49:00 AM
Beautifully scripted and total immersion in the theme. Great write...good luck in the contest.
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Date: 1/11/2016 2:47:00 PM
Dan, thank you so much for the nice comment
Date: 1/11/2016 5:41:00 AM
Wow! You weren't kidding ~ pure, unadulterated, bliss of a read!
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Date: 1/11/2016 9:46:00 AM
Jill, oh I love that word bliss, thank you so much for the wow and for returning to visit, appreciate ~
Date: 1/11/2016 2:06:00 AM
This is mesmerizing , beautiful words,best of luck in the contest, hugs / / :) dalia
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Date: 1/11/2016 9:47:00 AM
Dalia, thanks for the mesmerizing and the beautiful and the hugs !!
Date: 1/10/2016 4:19:00 PM
Constance, what a sweet one-liner, and I will! :), jill
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Date: 1/10/2016 10:44:00 PM
Jill, lol, one line has become many, please return ~
Date: 1/10/2016 3:41:00 PM
will wait by...
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Date: 1/10/2016 3:48:00 PM
Thanks Sage, still working on it, lol...

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