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Into the Blue

Into the blue run me and you. Naked as seals in the moonlight. Our first intercourse happened that night. Into the blue after dancing with you. On our wedding day, into the blue. After the sermon, me and you. Now alone I skinny dip. Into the blue without you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 1/16/2016 1:44:00 PM
Sensual! Thanks for visiting my page.
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Jean Murray
Date: 1/16/2016 2:26:00 PM
KEN!!!! Only you would see and admit the sensual in me. I will still never hold a candle to your member!
Date: 1/10/2016 4:52:00 PM
beautiful but sad Jean I feel blue after reading this:-( hugs Jan xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 1/10/2016 5:29:00 PM
Good on you Jean:-) Hugs jan xx
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Jean Murray
Date: 1/10/2016 5:27:00 PM
Don't be blue Jan. It was I who kicked him out six years ago.
Date: 1/10/2016 1:09:00 PM
so simple and complex at the same time. i really like this one, jean. killer ending...
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Jean Murray
Date: 1/10/2016 5:28:00 PM
All my poems are true stories. I would like someone to skinny dip with. But not my X husband.
Date: 1/10/2016 12:38:00 PM
Lovely, yet sad, Jean; written with your usual natural flair. I notice that we both based our entry on the sea...you referring to seals...me to dolphins:) ~ Regards // paul
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Jean Murray
Date: 1/10/2016 2:33:00 PM
I did not know about the competition until I read your entry Paul. The big difference is .....you are beside the sea in Malta. No wonder you mention dolphins and I seals.
Date: 1/10/2016 10:25:00 AM
Beautiful words my dear , loved every line , hugs / / :) dalia
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Jean Murray
Date: 1/10/2016 10:27:00 AM
Again, thank you Dalia.
Date: 1/10/2016 9:27:00 AM
Nice but sort of sad poem, Jean. Hope it does well in contest.
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Jean Murray
Date: 1/10/2016 9:43:00 AM
AW....a romantic I see. You do not remember me......DRIVING INSTRUCTER.??

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