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Into the Blue

Time shifting through the elements themselves Reveals little but what is of ourselves Over bridge of eternity I’ve flown Grasping at the railings of life’s unknown Colors they flash before my eyes twinkling Like the stars in the sky seeming winking Over and over inside my lost head I wander around looking for a bed A place to lie on to fill my dreams up Allowing rest to bring life to my cup The bridge composes of enlightenment Based off of hope’s lovely encampment Strong hopefulness for peace and desires true Times enveloping trip into the blue
Russell Sivey Contest: -BLUE- feeling blue or color blue (old/new) Sponsor: SKAT - LOVE 11/8/2013

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Date: 1/21/2014 6:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your win friend Russell. Happy New Year :) hugss ;)
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Date: 1/18/2014 6:35:00 PM
way to go in the blue contest, Russell. One of your best poems!
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Date: 11/10/2013 5:41:00 PM
Peace yes, wouldn't it be lovely Light & Love
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Date: 11/10/2013 3:15:00 PM
the ending couplet is really cool, Russell. So is this your first blue poem? you did well capturing its essence.
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Date: 11/10/2013 2:07:00 PM
love this, Russell
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Date: 11/10/2013 10:45:00 AM
wonderful painting of images stroked by the brush of enlightment.. i sure am moved by how this progressed and transformed like a shower of star's hope.. one of your best, russel..:) did you get my soupy?.. :) huggs
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Date: 11/10/2013 8:25:00 AM
This made me smile grand in those last few lines. Uplifting. How all of our days should begin & end...
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