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Into My Dream

I dreamt, I was a butterfly or was I, a butterfly dreaming . . . Peacefully detained by a delightful young gent, Lying in green mead where buttercups were beaming; Releasing an enchanting aromatic scent. Peacefully detained by a delightful young gent, His fascinating smile lured me in my slow stride, Releasing an enchanting aromatic scent; Where enrapturing view overtook me inside. His fascinating smile lured me in my slow stride, Entrancing flitter hypnotized to restful sleep, Where enrapturing view overtook me inside; When into my captivating dream he did seep. Entrancing flitter hypnotized to restful sleep, There he envisioned I was his true love to be, When into my captivating dream he did seep; Making a woman without wings to set me free. There he envisioned I was his true love to be, Lying in green mead where buttercups were beaming, Making a woman without wings to set me free; I dreamt, I was a butterfly or was I, a butterfly dreaming . . . Copyright © 2011 By Caryl S. Muzzey July 9, 2011 Third Place Winner ~ "Daydreams and dreams and dreams” Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France~ A Rambling Poet Aug. 5, 2011

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Date: 7/18/2011 7:43:00 AM
Congratulations Caryl on your win in the contest of Constance La France "Day Dreams and dreams and dreams" Love, Carol
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Date: 7/15/2011 9:43:00 PM
Such an enchanting write Carly. Many congrats for this win.
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Date: 7/15/2011 8:09:00 PM
Beautiful Caryl. Many congrats on your super win, Lainie
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Date: 7/15/2011 6:10:00 PM
Congrats Caryl on your terrific third place win for this first class poetry ... beautiful daydreaming luv..
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Date: 7/15/2011 5:53:00 PM
My congratulations on the third place win in the contest, Caryl
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Date: 7/10/2011 11:48:00 AM
just beautiful Caryl
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