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Into a Warm Night

I remember each curve, nodding in quiet response moving towards me, as you walked across the floor each finger lifting gently to caress the welcomed silence when eyes danced in unison in motionless space when need and want became two hands tethered without fear, in candle's light as the soft trembles of a saxophone whispered in the background Upon the wall, flickering light painted a silhouette shadow upon shadow, before the eyes closed leaving the world of sight, into a world of senses cool breezes from windows quenched the thirst from the sweat of our palms we danced without care or restraint wrapped in sheltered arms of love as the world disappeared into a warm night from melted candles and empty glasses 9/21/16 contest Free Verse Love Poem-2

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Date: 4/16/2018 12:55:00 AM
Congrats on another win with this gem, Frederic - wonderful! :-)
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Date: 4/9/2018 11:30:00 PM
Beautiful! Wonderful penning Frederick, congratulations on a fine win! xomo!
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Date: 4/9/2018 10:51:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful and romantic poem.
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Date: 4/8/2018 7:44:00 AM
Very sensuous. Lovely, Frederic. Congrats on your podium win.
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Date: 2/25/2017 12:20:00 AM
Thoughtfully and creatively penned ... congrats, my friend! :)
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Date: 2/24/2017 8:46:00 PM
Lovely, Frederick! Congrats!
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Date: 2/24/2017 8:37:00 PM
I thought I recognized this one, but couldn't recall who it was but I knew it was a great poem. Well done Frederick and congrats on solo #2.
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Date: 10/13/2016 9:36:00 AM
This is such a romantic poem. Reminds me of a recent write of mine, dancing in the moonlight, although I think yours is better!
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Date: 10/7/2016 11:17:00 PM
Congradulations on winning,awesome poem
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Date: 10/1/2016 10:01:00 PM
ooo la la that's a love poem....awesome
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Date: 9/25/2016 11:24:00 PM
Really lovely....
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Date: 9/24/2016 11:04:00 PM
how soft is the mood of your work, fredrick.. my best congrats!... huggs
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Date: 9/23/2016 10:31:00 AM
Frederic, sooooooo romantic and beautiful dear man...congratulations on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo
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Date: 9/22/2016 8:25:00 PM
Back with congratulations! Agnes
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Date: 9/22/2016 3:09:00 PM
WOW, this is fantastic, Frederic. I just love the atmosphere you created with this. FAVE
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Date: 9/21/2016 1:53:00 PM
Lovely and romantic, well done, Frederic. Good luck for the contest. Agnes
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