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Intimate Friendship

Intimate Friendship An appetite for a soulful intimate bond, A craving every moment to talk and meet, But still groping deep in a worldly pond, And constant gaze at the door wanting to greet, Can it be just crazy love and romance? And not an intimate relationship to treasure, Leaving into leftist stance by any chance ? How could the intensity one ever measure? When my every breath inhales his scent, Every murmur and beat says his name, How can he ask me to be prudent ? And hang on to later put off the game ? Intimate friendship is ethereal, would ever last, No escape, no excuses, perpetually aghast ! Written August 30th, 2014 For contest 'Sonnet on an Intimate relationship' by Regina Riddle Awarded Rank 5th

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Date: 9/3/2014 9:33:00 AM
Enjoyed this passionate write, Dr. Upma. congrats
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Date: 9/3/2014 1:15:00 AM
this fond work delights, dr.upma.. rounds of applause to you!
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Date: 9/3/2014 12:43:00 AM
Thank you so much, Dr, for entering the contest and congratulations on your win. I enjoy your words. With love and prayers, Gina
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Date: 9/1/2014 10:54:00 PM
This is a great sonnet my friend!! Best of luck in the contest!!
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Date: 8/30/2014 11:39:00 PM
hmmm, it sounds like maybe you want more than just friendship. it is really cool to see what people are writing about and tonight gave me an idea finally what to do for mine!!
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Date: 8/30/2014 11:38:00 PM
Love comes in so many costumes and forms. I love your line: But still groping deep in a worldly pond. We humans are built to search for love. A wonderful entry for the contest!
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Date: 8/30/2014 11:32:00 PM
Beautiful Upma and a super-awesome take on Regina's contest. Sending a smile and a hug - Verlena.
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Date: 8/30/2014 4:43:00 PM
Wow!! Way to go for the contest..Reads like a winner..Very passionate work..Thanks for the visit..Sara
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Date: 8/30/2014 3:46:00 PM
Wonderful sonnet Upma.... Intimacy is important.... Hugs Tim
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Date: 8/30/2014 12:44:00 PM
- Dr. Upma a lovely sonnet ! - Friendship is the best college your character can get their degree from - Believe in friendship, search it and hold it sacred when it comes - Luck in contest! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/30/2014 12:31:00 PM
i really enjoyed this Sonnet. Tighly woven and written to perfection. Thank You.
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