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Intimate Betrayal

In the desert you make your own shade the heat of the unflinching eye high above is without mercy or menace there are no apologies no running wild in the casbahs but praying and walking to find a cool pitcher of liquid or something to release the visions dancing between the velvet stars far into the night and further into the mathematics of memory where dead scholars pass judgement discussing and debating historical and scientific transformations the delayed fate of nations the relations between tribes and the scribes who recollect and record each luminous syllable sipping their painted cups of jasmine tea nibbling on the rinds of desiccated oranges plucked from besotted and iridescent trees long long ago

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Date: 8/29/2016 9:37:00 PM
You have a skill rarely seen! I love every line!Keep posting the views will come believe me I am spreading the word. Have you thought about contests? I know I know kills creativity right? Not necessarily! It is a good way to get recognition in the beginning the views will come when others discover your talent!
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Barry Levy
Date: 8/30/2016 11:40:00 AM
I thank you, but I am not worthy of your praise. I still have a lot to learn, but hope I'm getting closer to attaining that skill. You are very kind and generous.

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