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When the rays of a small campfire ember find its way to the depths of passion sparking a heat so lustful it’s hard to remember- A time we didn’t fuse, I lay. As that ember dies in the moonlit sky leaving shades of sweat upon the faintly heard tussles of a trampled ground- Hackneyed and abused, I stay. For the fatigued water lays to salt after the dew of a sunrise fog choreographs beauty of love into our own- We coalesce as one recused, I pray; “Please don’t let go and I will fill the muddles of darkness with magical flowing beams through zealous tears that absorb the clouds with hues of reverence both dull and bright”- And simply refuse to breakaway.

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Date: 7/31/2017 10:41:00 PM
Passion speaks through this fabulous poem.
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Date: 4/13/2017 7:40:00 AM
many congrats on your win Lukas it is so lovely to read the first poems of poets on soup:-) hugs Jan xx
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Lukas Ficklin
Date: 4/13/2017 11:34:00 AM
Thx Jan... It really is!
Date: 4/12/2017 10:45:00 PM
Thank you for entering my contest and congrats to you
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Lukas Ficklin
Date: 4/13/2017 11:33:00 AM
:)
Date: 5/26/2016 9:35:00 AM
A very passionate first offering! Welcome to the soup.
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Date: 5/1/2016 2:25:00 PM
Very nice your first poem i have read from you. Carry on ahead with true spirit as a nice poetess. Welcome and wish your heartfelt love. Loved always my lovely friend, bl
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Lukas Ficklin
Date: 5/1/2016 2:36:00 PM
Thank you BL! Although I am in touch with my feminine side I do have to correct your gender term.. A poet I am! Your love is always appreciated.
Date: 3/14/2016 1:18:00 PM
- Thank you for your first poem, Lukas :) - I welcome you to Poetry Soup :) - Hope you will find our "soup" friendly and fun - Good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/12/2016 10:03:00 PM
Lukas, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 3/8/2016 11:39:00 PM
Lukas, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Lukas Ficklin
Date: 3/9/2016 7:34:00 PM
Wow what a warm welcome!! I like this place already. Stay AWESOME Linda!

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