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Internal Bruise

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Internal Bruise

Here I am, back again
Hoping to find some words to say
Wanting it to come like rain
Pouring out with disarray

All through today I have been
Wanting to let out my scream
Crying to let go of the sin
She has forgotten, so it seems

Why can't I transform the blows
The ones that attack the heart
So I could just easily expose
Physical pain that quickly departs

Glances at you turns to hurt
Listening to your voice
My mouth tastes dirt
You gave me no other choice

Now I loathe the time I spent with you
How I wish I could take it back
Way back then, I  never knew
Behind your disguise hides a plague

I have tried so hard without result
You seem so neutral towards
My explanations, an insult
To my effort, no fruit of reward

So here I am, back again
Just wanted to tell you this
To keep myself from being insane
Your friendship I will no longer miss

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  1. Date: 6/13/2009 7:13:00 AM
    Terrific poem Analie>James

  1. Date: 6/13/2009 7:00:00 AM
    "turn to hurt"...VERY very powerful as a statement...great potential as a good benifit from a bit of tweaking in the meter (sylable count) further emphasis the rapid, punching flow you have going. Light & Love

  1. Date: 4/29/2009 3:20:00 AM
    Excellent form flow and rhyming! You have a special talent, and a pretty name!! Best wishes, Keith