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Intended For Attention

To me a person, is defined by there intention. And girl, your just fine, but you insist on the attention. Yea life is gonna' suck, when "sucks" your definition. And honestly, and obviously, you're something that I'd mention. You see, sadly, I don't mention a lot... And hardly do I ever mention things I do not got... But baby, did I mention, that I did this on the spot, So I didn't think of much, but I thought of you a lot...

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Skat A

Date: 6/5/2016 9:37:00 PM

WILLIAM, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT*

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/17/2011 1:58:00 PM

Welcome to PS, William! I am sure you will enjoy it here. I understand that you wrote this on the spot so will overlook your "intentional going against the grain" lol You were after a special effect...letting her know that you're thinking about her more than other things! Hope I'm right.. if not forgive me. Always, Annalise

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/17/2011 12:08:00 PM

Despite the few spelling and grammar flaws, this is an entertaining little piece of rhyme.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/17/2011 4:31:00 AM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup William. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors this year. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information about PoetrySoup. If you don't find what you are looking for ask any poet here. Everyone is willing to help. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/16/2011 6:56:00 PM

Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your poetry tonight with it's creative theme.. hope your time on Soup will be filled with sharing with luv..