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Author's Notes:  This is a "Tanka" or a Japanese verse form write on the subject of "Intelligence."  I wrote this one as a companion write in comparison and contrast to the earlier Tanka I released today under the title of "Stupidity."  My purpose in many past Tanka writes was always to present a pair of mutually exclusive topics, i.e., one on the positive side and the other on the negative side.  I've found over time that it is often difficult to mention one particular topic without also touching on its philosophical or relational opposite.  "Man's differentiation . . . ," as I mention in the fourth verse of this Tanka has the flavor of Mankind's place in the evolutionary schema of living creatures on our Earth.  There is much to think about here with this particular write.  (Gary Bateman - May 15, 2015) (Tanka)  

Categories:  allegory, growth, imagination, inspirational, introspection, metaphor, and smart.  

Syllable Grouping:  5-7-5-7-7 = 31 Syllables; Total Lines (Verses) = 5; Total Words = 21. 

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Intelligence A superb virtue— Use for good, and not evil! Smart is always good . . . Man’s differentiation . . . To be nurtured at all times! Gary Bateman, Copyright © All Rights Reserved, May 15, 2015 (Tanka)

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Date: 6/5/2015 4:06:00 PM
Gary, yes intellogence must be nurtured and enhanced... =')! I see you published a book.. congrats!!!~olive eloisa..
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Gary Bateman
Date: 6/5/2015 4:52:00 PM
Thanks Olive for your read!! Intelligence is definitely very important!! My book is available, by the way, worldwide through Amazon.com, Amazon.uk, Amazon.de and other major book vendors. The Title is: "Conversations with My Muse." I highly recommend it. I'm already working now on my second book which will be a book of selected poetry and short stories. Best Wishes!! Gary
Date: 6/5/2015 12:00:00 AM
This was a nice one to see tonight, Gary . let me check out a few more!
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Gary Bateman
Date: 6/5/2015 5:39:00 AM
Hello Andrea!! OK -- Please do. BTW, during my recent sabbatical from PoetrySoup during late Feb thru April, I finally got my first book of poetry published. (It's advertised in PS Classified Ads.) The title of my book is: "Conversations with My Muse." It was released worldwide on April 9th. It's available at Amazon.com and Barnes & Noble in the USA. I highly recommend it to you Andrea, if you're interested. Best Wishes, Gary
Date: 5/25/2015 5:50:00 AM
Beautifully penned, Gary.
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Gary Bateman
Date: 5/25/2015 5:56:00 AM
Thanks again ML!! I just happen to be down here in Stuttgart, Germany this week. (I will get caught with your latest poems on my return home later to Northern Germany.) Already working now on my second book, BTW, which will include a section of short stories. Fun!! Fun!! Best Always, Gary

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