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her cold crimson corpse into the heart that loved him . . . he now twists the knife Written 4/9/15 by Andrea Dietrich For the Get Your Senryu On Poetry Contest of Judy Konos

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/24/2015 4:16:00 PM
Wow! Powerful!
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Date: 4/18/2015 5:05:00 PM
Andrea, this is a nice way in getting your Senryu on :) Congrats on the win. LUV LINDA
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Date: 4/15/2015 8:04:00 PM
that's excruciating Andie!!~olive eloisa
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Date: 4/13/2015 10:33:00 AM
sounds very painful, even for a corpse. Andrea, congrats for a top win. Mohan
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Date: 4/12/2015 10:53:00 PM
great write. Thanks for the comment and unfortunately it is true.
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Date: 4/12/2015 9:20:00 PM
Hello Andrea, thank you for the comment.. One of the original titles was Beauty and the beast, on my big foot poem.. LOL.. I'm going to use the title for a while... stopping by to say hi and thanks.. XOOL... senryu,..LINDA
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Date: 4/12/2015 10:28:00 AM
Awesome Andrea, congratulations on your win as well ;) hugs Wilma
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Date: 4/12/2015 10:23:00 AM
Back with congrats on your win, Andrea! // paul
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Date: 4/12/2015 8:59:00 AM
Congrats on your win Andrea! I knew this one would be a win. I still love the picture. This would make a great tattoo.
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Date: 4/12/2015 2:53:00 AM
A great congrats on your win for this poem of excellence. An art beautifully colored. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl
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Date: 4/11/2015 7:37:00 PM
Congrad's on Your win. Light & Love
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Date: 4/11/2015 5:19:00 PM
I love this, congrats. Hugs.
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Date: 4/11/2015 3:33:00 PM
A friend of yours? Congrats Richard
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Date: 4/11/2015 2:47:00 PM
A tale from the dark side...Congrats on your win Andrea
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Date: 4/11/2015 9:50:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Andrea I really enjoyed this one:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 4/11/2015 9:49:00 AM
How does that song go? "Nobody does it better"...That's you Andrea!
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Date: 4/11/2015 7:47:00 AM
Dark with severe intent, nice Andrea, my kinda poetry, smiles, James :)
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Date: 4/11/2015 4:12:00 AM
There are many ways for one to betray love.There could be the physical,emotional and mental aspect.All hurt the same.What a heartless bugger.A deep dark senryu.
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Date: 4/11/2015 3:37:00 AM
Right from the depths of Disturbia...very dark...this is perfectly good! :)
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Date: 4/11/2015 2:46:00 AM
spine- tingling, andie.. now i see your dark side.. greeat job!.. huggs
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Date: 4/11/2015 12:52:00 AM
A touch of Gothic from you, Andrea. Nice. Good luck, Viv x
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Date: 4/10/2015 11:39:00 PM
Ouch I feel the pain on many levels! Loved the twists and turns of this poem! :)
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Date: 4/10/2015 11:16:00 PM
It's interesting how passion sometimes seems to teeter between love and hate...love your take on this Andrea
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Date: 4/10/2015 6:21:00 PM
A great write! I love the picture. Rose and knife. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 4/10/2015 5:09:00 PM
A very powerful Senryu; good luck in the contest.
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