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Instilled

Cold Winter morn Hoars frost upon Star Magnolia shivers Sun's up Buds Begin to set Undaunted by The ice, snow, wind.. has hope Spring comes

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Kevin Sabay

Date: 3/19/2010 11:52:00 PM

Great poem, I like really like the way you transition. -Kevin Sabay

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 3/18/2010 11:17:00 AM

Absolutely beautiful. The second stanza is wonderful and has tremendous amount of energy and bright hopes to see the dawn of spring. 'Buds, begin to set, undaunted by, the ice, snow, wind.... has hope Spring comes' I really like it very much. Thanks and many thanks for your precious comments on Vasava 8 my friend. Best wishes and love......xxxxxx Ravindra...xxx Sara Ken

John Freeman

Date: 3/17/2010 6:11:00 PM

Lets hope spring is ready Sara. The cold has tried to hang on for the longest time this year. Smile. Agape, Moses

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 3/17/2010 11:12:00 AM

nicley penned, funny how the cold does not effect the english peas but would kill some things.

Gert W. Knop

Date: 3/17/2010 8:58:00 AM

Thank you for your comment on "Water of the Andes", Sara! Sometimes I am missing those fresh winds and crisp air of the Andes. But now we are welcoming spring and you did well with this!...Nice poem!...Gert

James Marshall Goff

Date: 3/16/2010 8:29:00 PM

oh, I love the artistic way you created this tight art, Sara! to mine favs! as Reuben would say! thanks for the witty comments, loved it! smiles! jimbo

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/16/2010 7:21:00 PM

Thankxxx for enjoying my poetry and your warm comments are most welcome Sara.. appreciate very much..luv.. Linda-Marie..

John Beam

Date: 3/16/2010 5:55:00 PM

thanks fo comment really enjoyed you continue also great write

Jeralynn Clark

Date: 3/16/2010 5:16:00 AM

It is like turning on a light switch isn't it? The glory of SPRING!!!! Love Jeralynn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/16/2010 5:08:00 AM

Hurry Hurry ... still raining more lightly now so hopefully Spring will start to surface too.. a lovely morning poem to read to begin my day Sara... vivid and visual picture from your gifted pen..luv.. Linda-Marie..