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Inspiring Rainy Morning

Eagerly I arose to welcome winsome spring Anticipating an ebullient, sun-swept morning Only to witness opaline skies turn gloomy Shrouded in dampness of rain pitter pattering Swirling dust emanating petrichor themes Scattering dreariness on visage of dawning. You too were awed, extolling scenic setting, Lauding crimson hues that darkened swiftly, Adulating rustling winds swaying maple trees With echoes of thunder heard intermittently As gray clouds hung closer, roiling hastily, Pouring down streams, flooding streets rapidly. Farther in distance, storm was now fleeting Where sun’s golden rays began emerging Scintillating mountains in amber ray beams Lifting my spirits in birds’ rhythmic chirping As your intimations warbled amorous hints Arousing rhythms of romantic heart strings. Charmed by tempo of dawn’s chromatic arc As rising sun vanquished remnants of dark, Lovingly we embraced missives of love spark Echoing lyrics strummed by doting hearts, Drawing inspiration from gilded azure skies, Hypnotized in allure of your enamored eyes. November 11, 2022 Placed 1st: Inspiring Rainy Days Poetry Contest Sponsor: Sotto Poet

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Date: 5/25/2023 3:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Vijay. This poem is simply amazing. :)
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Date: 11/30/2022 12:02:00 PM
Congrats for your high placement in Sotto's contest . Fabulous use of imagery, as always, Vijay
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Date: 11/21/2022 9:14:00 AM
This puts me in mind of a song by Bobby Goldsboro called "I Love A Rainy Night". I always liked that song because I do love a rainy night. Sometimes I enjoy a morning rain too though. We need the rain as well as the sunshine. Great write here as always. God Bless, JB
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Date: 11/19/2022 4:21:00 AM
Your use of exotic color schemes has always fascinated me Vijay in all of your superb poems you have created. As always beautiful write, best of luck in the contest. Hugs blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 11/16/2022 7:37:00 AM
My apologies for missing this poem. I was rather sick and had to stay in bed. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 11/14/2022 1:30:00 PM
Vijay, CONGRATS on your win with this lovely, descriptive piece pairing nature and romance. Janice
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Date: 11/14/2022 1:30:00 PM
Congrats on the win, Vijay! I loved the imagery and the adjectives were exquisite. Thanks for sharing, Bill
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Date: 11/13/2022 10:55:00 AM
- Vijay, you describe it so beautifully with your chosen words - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) -
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/14/2022 5:53:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise. Much appreciate.
Date: 11/13/2022 10:28:00 AM
I really enjoyed this beautiful poem. I love the line ..Echoing lyrics strummed by doting hearts. This is so nice. Congratulations Vijay :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/14/2022 5:52:00 AM
Much appreciate, Heidi. Many thanks.
Date: 11/13/2022 7:29:00 AM
A gloomy day playing the blues turns to romance playing heart strings, Well penned Vijay
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/14/2022 5:52:00 AM
Thank you Joseph.
Date: 11/12/2022 11:22:00 PM
Back with congratulations on your win.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/14/2022 5:52:00 AM
Thank you Eve.
Date: 11/12/2022 2:27:00 PM
Very romantic! Best of luck in the contest. "Charmed by tempo of dawn’s chromatic arc As rising sun vanquished remnants of dark,"~ Beautiful! Have a great weekend my friend!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/14/2022 5:52:00 AM
Much appreciate your visit and comments my friend. Many thanks Joe for stopping by and commenting.
Date: 11/12/2022 12:34:00 PM
Very descriptive contest entry. Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. I appreciate the visit to my page. Sara
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/12/2022 1:36:00 PM
Thank you Sara. Much appreciate your visit and kind thoughts.
Date: 11/12/2022 4:22:00 AM
jay, " dawn's chromatic arc" sets the tone for me! Your lines set inspiration on display!! Happy Saturday!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/12/2022 5:00:00 AM
Thank you Mike for visiting and commenting. Much appreciate your kind feedback.
Date: 11/11/2022 7:29:00 PM
Inspiring and sensual, all at the same time. Feeling droplets of rain softly 'pon the skin, while a vibrating melody surrounds lovers. Yes, the rain leaves me in complete awe. In so many ways. This is beautiful, Vijay. My best to you. :) Brandy
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/12/2022 4:59:00 AM
You write best sensual poems my friend--so I'm glad you see this poem as one. Much appreciate your visit and kind feedback, Brandy. Many thanks.
Date: 11/11/2022 7:22:00 PM
Wow, certainly inspiring is this gem, Vijay.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/12/2022 4:58:00 AM
Many thanks, Harry. Much appreciate your visit and kind remarks.
Date: 11/11/2022 11:40:00 AM
Very lovely, Vijay. ...as rising sun vanquished remnants of dark. Beautiful. Best of luck in contest.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/11/2022 5:41:00 PM
Many thanks Ann for visiting and commenting. Much appreciate your kind feedback.
Date: 11/11/2022 8:20:00 AM
Wow .... what brilliant use of words."Lovingly we embraced missives of love spark Echoing lyrics strummed by doting hearts", After the rain when the sky turned clear, hearts danced in the cool air with delightful romantic fervor. Into my Fave.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/11/2022 5:40:00 PM
I am delighted to receive your wonderful feedback and a FAVE from you means a lot to me. Much appreciate your supportive comments, as always, Valsa. Many thanks.
Date: 11/11/2022 7:01:00 AM
Your eyes seem to see all Vijay and your heart exudes softness and allure, I love it gl
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/11/2022 5:36:00 PM
So very kind of you. Much appreciate, Vienna. Many thanks for your visit and comments.
Date: 11/11/2022 6:56:00 AM
You caught me with your title with this nice imagery and feel well written verse . Goood luck in Lasaad's contest. Many blessing my friend.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/11/2022 5:35:00 PM
Blessings to you as well, Eve. Glad you stopped by with your kind feedback. Much appreciate--many thanks.

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