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you see what's on my mind can you tell my love is real i think of ways to explain but it goes down the drain i try to grab them back but the skills i lack this is all so wrong but it feels so right sitting here thinking of ways to fight to win your love back but it shoves me out the way back tracking of things i did wrong trying to fix anything i see out of place i did everything i could but it never come out right i want to be the one that stays in your life but my heart tells me i'm not that right so what do i do from here do i stay or leave.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/26/2010 11:16:00 AM
A passionate write. If you love him let him fly; one day he'll fly back in your arms.
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Date: 7/13/2010 7:02:00 PM
Really enjoyed your write and will read more of it. If you have not checked it already please take a look my new poem titled criminals part 3- thank for the read and enjoy your day.
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