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Inspiration's Blooms Minichu

All the natural heart within me sings Of a season's journeying flower, For what the sun's talent on petals brings Though the storm on pane riddles and breaks, The bloom's a song gently fine— To my will, satiate. Unburdened night Another's eyes' find Nigh All the natural heart within me sings— The bloom's a song gently fine, Nigh.

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Sotto Poet

Date: 12/2/2023 2:01:00 PM

We are always in need of words that might inspire, and you have written several excellent poems in this regard, Paige

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/2/2023 10:32:00 AM

You sure do this form well. I can't get a win with the ones I wrote. I'll probably give up. I find this form so difficult to do and there is no reward for all my effort. I really think yours will be a winner though. Sure hope so.

Paige Hind
Date: 12/2/2023 4:38:00 PM

Hey, each person has their own niche. You write well without it. :) Thanks for your kind words...

Ink Empress

Date: 12/2/2023 3:25:00 AM

Beautiful take on this form. I really love especially the opening stanza and depth of what you’ve expressed here in such seamless flow with creative rhymes and rhythm: rain or shine in nature we find inspiration, pleasure reading you

Silent One

Date: 12/1/2023 11:44:00 PM

Inspiring poem...you have written a few for this form and done them well....we always need inspiring words.