Get Your Premium Membership

Inspiration Taps Softly

Sometimes late at night as we succumb to sleep We greet creative thoughts beyond those of counting sheep It’s said Thomas Edison held coins in his hands That clanged into a bucket noisily as planned Stirring, he was intrigued by notions for invention That seemed to emerge from a different dimension It worked for him and if you enter an alpha state You, too, may find this source of inspiration great For it is this exercise of the mind unwinding That serves to recount the day, subtle reminding Of the joy you found when beholding a flower And the thrill of discovering nature’s power Or the touch of a hand from one who reaches out When a vulnerable heart is mired in doubt And the scent of loved ones’ perfume on a pillow That permits our longing memories to billow The sounds and tastes of each long day also emerge As slumber takes charge and begins its nightly purge So keep a pen and pad at bedside as you retire Knowing that inspiration is likely to spire

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

123
Date: 6/3/2010 11:49:00 AM
I especially identify with this poem, and agree with it's concept. Each new advance in mankind's developement comes from the depth that you bring out, so clearly, Carolyn. Congratulations on your second round win. Agape, Moses
Login to Reply
Date: 6/3/2010 9:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry x2 making it through the first round Carolyn. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 6/1/2010 6:42:00 PM
Congratulations on being among the first rounders Carolyn. I enjoyed this poem and know the feeling but usually drop off before I get anything down. :):) ..cheers Margaret
Login to Reply
Date: 6/1/2010 5:35:00 AM
Very weell written and congrats for the first round, Carolyn...Love, Gert
Login to Reply
Date: 6/1/2010 12:41:00 AM
Excellent... Congratulations...:JP]
Login to Reply
Date: 5/31/2010 8:05:00 AM
Very good advice here Carolyn.A worthy Ist round winner indeed.Rgds Brian
Login to Reply
Date: 5/19/2010 8:21:00 PM
O I love that so much. I enjoy writing, but I do not have the gift of rhyming. :( Thank you for reading my work, & also for sharing this with us all, beautiful & so true
Login to Reply
Date: 3/14/2010 4:12:00 PM
Carolyn, Rereading this poem I find so much soul and insight that I can't help but smile and declare that you truly have caught the muse. Love, Tom
Login to Reply
Date: 2/16/2010 7:09:00 AM
this is great i loved the way you described every thing using just the perfect words, well i can appreciate that simce it can be hard to try and find the words to use to make it sound exactly the way you wanted. =)jo
Login to Reply
Date: 2/12/2010 3:24:00 AM
true n inspiring.will make a note of that. sweet dreams ma'am.
Login to Reply
Date: 2/9/2010 9:06:00 AM
Only one who has had those moment can write so truly of it ... we are called to labor by a source beyond us, and he chose no announce moment to come upon us ... well done!
Login to Reply
Date: 2/8/2010 9:37:00 AM
T%hose last two lines are all too true, my dear. I know them well. Thank you for your kindness. By the way, this here would not be at all bad for a Broadway or classic old Hollywood musical lyric. Regards, Gerard.
Login to Reply
Date: 2/5/2010 5:44:00 AM
Nice poem, absolutely right, though for me it only works for stories, not poetry.
Login to Reply
Date: 2/3/2010 8:28:00 AM
Rod Serling also wrote many episodes of the twilight zone using this method great title carolyn and really good write as always your a plessure to read
Login to Reply
Date: 2/1/2010 8:11:00 AM
SOUP MAIL REPLY...
Login to Reply
Date: 1/29/2010 10:11:00 PM
Dear Carolyn, You are and Inspiration with this " YOUR POEM of YOUR Inspiration " I will keep a pen by my bed From now on This is a Winner to me Thank-YOU for YOUR Gracious Comments Muchly Appreciated LOVE YOU ALWAYS...HG
Login to Reply
Date: 1/28/2010 2:03:00 PM
i really love the last two lines. A beautiful poem... sweet and listful. I want to dream now as dreamers do. -Susan Mills
Login to Reply
Date: 1/28/2010 12:13:00 AM
Thank you for your welcome blog comments today Carolyn.Rgds Brian
Login to Reply
Date: 1/27/2010 10:50:00 PM
Superbly written and orchestrated. I love reading your poetry...it is always inspiring and a pleaure to read. If this is how you do it, it is no wonder your poetry is in a class of its own. Mac
Login to Reply
Date: 1/27/2010 3:59:00 PM
sounds like a winner! great idea
Login to Reply
Date: 1/27/2010 8:19:00 AM
Best wishes with this one Carolyn.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today
Login to Reply
Date: 1/26/2010 10:53:00 PM
You are such a skilled writer and know exactly how inspiration works. My muse appears when least expected whether I have a pad of paper or not I have to write. I can always find a pen but I have been known to write on napkins, leaves (not easy), and even the back of the electric bill...LOL! Thank you for your kind words on my writing and for being such an inspiration to me to work harder on improving my writing skills. Best wishes to you in the contest. Smiles from Lolita
Login to Reply
Date: 1/26/2010 8:06:00 PM
well written from a talented mind for sure,and one that knows inspiration comes at many or at any time,,,,yes for me too many lines fall into my mind while falling asleep,,sometimes so many if I did keep a pen and paper at the bedside I would get no sleep at all,,anyway my friend good luck in the contest and thank you for reading and commenting and for leaving a piece of your heart and mind upon my words,,,Blessings..Cecil
Login to Reply
Date: 1/26/2010 7:08:00 PM
Your gracious comment, appreciative, sincerely, love, Moses
Login to Reply
Date: 1/26/2010 3:06:00 PM
Had to come back and read in light of the sad news today about John... your words are prolific and so intense ..reminding me that life is from one breath to another with nothing for sure... I think of John and the contest he is sponsoring too and it pains me to think this tragedy has now occured in his life.. his career was escalating too.. so your words speak of the moment we get inspired to write .. same moment could be our last .. thankxxx for your great blog comment on my blog too..
Login to Reply
123

Book: Shattered Sighs