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Written on December 2, 2023

Format of the New form of Rhyme named MlNICHU is as follows: 1. Total12 lines (4 stanzas of 3 lines each) 2. Rhyme scheme: Aba, cBc, dbD, ABD. 3. 4th stanza consists of repeat of 1st line of stanza1, 2nd line of stanza 2, and 3rd line of stanza 3. 4. Poem should stick to a chosen theme through all stanzas. A twist can be introduced in third stanza, if required by the theme, to make it more interesting. 5. Syllable count : Stanza 1: 6,12,3 Stanza 2: 4,8,2 Stanza 3: 2,4,1 Stanza 4: 6,8,1.

Discovered in the soul, Silent breathes of light and love, dancing in shadows, Who console. Gentling the night, Glistening rhymes poets compose, Insight. Desires, Beautiful prose, Fires. Discovered in the soul, Glistening rhymes poets compose, Fires.

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Unseeking Seeker

Date: 12/22/2023 7:19:00 PM

This is stunningly beautiful, Gina ~ warmest congratulations on your win, thanks for sharing.

Ink Empress

Date: 12/22/2023 8:39:00 AM

Wow this is absolutely gorgeous dear gina! I love everything about this, congratulations on your win! This definitely is one of the most exquisite minichus I’ve read.

Silent One

Date: 12/3/2023 5:04:00 AM

You did this form really well Gina.. Inspirational selection of words..

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 12/2/2023 3:39:00 PM

such a soft and delicate poem, Gina. I admire what you've done with this form of rhyme poetry. I have to fave this one. enjoy your evening, hugs, Sara

Christina Bowring

Date: 12/2/2023 10:09:00 AM

Such a beautiful poem dear Gina. I do like the new format and you have done it immense justice. Such exquisite poetic lines and I love the refrain lines especially. A well crafted poem from your magical pen that was inspiring to read. Thank you for sharing. Many blessings to you x :):)