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Insomnia

The sun shines on your Dark eyes Pale face Blank mind Veiled emotion This is the aftermath of deprivation The moon sparks up your Overrun mind Burdened by today's thoughts Reminded of yesterday's emotions Revisited by last year's memories Tempted by next year's ambitions This is you...deprived

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Skat A

Date: 1/23/2016 9:16:00 PM

EMMY:) Congratulations on having your poem featured in the soups, Home Page. ~SKAT~

Emmy Weatherill
Date: 1/24/2016 7:32:00 AM

Thank you very much!! I was so excited after hearing that it's featured on the home page! X X

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/8/2015 1:12:00 PM

Emmy, thank you for the wonderful reply...LINDA

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/8/2015 5:33:00 AM

Emmy, thank you so much for the wonderful reply... LINDA

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/7/2015 11:55:00 AM

- Welcome to P Soup, with your first poem Emmy - Always nice to meet new "poets" - I look forward to more write from you in the future - Happy weekend :) - // Anne-Lise :))

Emmy Weatherill
Date: 3/8/2015 1:18:00 PM

Thank you very much Anne-Lise, I've had many lovely welcomes here and I really appreciate it! Thanks again and I'll be sure to check your poems out :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/6/2015 3:11:00 AM

EMMY, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@

Emmy Weatherill
Date: 3/7/2015 2:49:00 AM

Thanks so much Linda, I've found that this website is perfect to share my ideas because of the kind comments I've received already! Thanks again Em :)

Steven Hanlon

Date: 3/4/2015 5:53:00 AM

well expressed emmy, know that look, good job and welcome

Emmy Weatherill
Date: 3/4/2015 6:19:00 AM

Thanks a lot Steven, it was just something I came up with in the early hours of this morning!