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Insomnia

I've tossed and turned, I need my sleep! A glass of milk, might hold the charm I take a pill, I count the sheep Twelve flocks go by, ...the clock alarms!
_____________________________________________________ For Dr. Ram's Contest "Chastushka Me" 9/5/14

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Date: 9/16/2014 9:48:00 PM
perhaps you are allergic to wool. Nice touch on a tricky form.
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Date: 9/16/2014 3:41:00 PM
Awesome one from you. Glad I finally am seeing it on this winnners' list. Congratulations.
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Date: 9/16/2014 2:09:00 PM
:D Can relate to this witty write, Carrie. Counting sheep actually works for me sometimes. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/16/2014 11:24:00 AM
Very clever write Carrie many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/16/2014 8:36:00 AM
Witty chastushka, Carrie! Once in a while I find it hard to sleep, but would not want to suffer of insomnia on a daily basis! It would send me BAAnanas! Congrats on your fine win. // paul
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Date: 9/16/2014 7:40:00 AM
So true Carrie. I can relate to this. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 9/16/2014 6:26:00 AM
Congrats on the win in my contest and thanks for the support, Carrie
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Date: 9/5/2014 8:10:00 PM
ha! very clever, carrie!
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