Get Your Premium Membership

Inside the Clouds

Sometimes I wonder About the puffy clouds What is inside them? Is it soft and smooth? Or is it gooey sticky? Or hard like a rock? The clouds in the sky I ponder about it What makes the shapes? How do they change size? Do they change inside? I do ponder this Does the color change? Inside the clouds? From grey to white From the setting sun? There was a cloud pink When did that begin? Does it change inside? To show color out side? Planes fly into the clouds They all see whiteness It is very strange Inside the puffy clouds

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 8/4/2022 1:14:00 AM
Peaceful thoughts.. great write. Very nicely penned... Blessings ~Paghunda
Login to Reply
De Beaulieu Avatar
Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/6/2022 4:29:00 AM
Hello Paghunda, So nice to see you. Thank you for the lovely comment. I hope all is well with you. Blessing my friend.
Date: 7/26/2022 2:24:00 PM
Hi Darlene, it is wonderful to read through your peaceful thoughts. It makes me think about clouds in a different light. This is a creative write that makes the reader think on the questions posed. I have to admit, I love clouds. Has to be a fave, my friend. Have a wonderful evening. Hugs always ..... Mike. XX
Login to Reply
De Beaulieu Avatar
Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/26/2022 3:36:00 PM
Hello Mike, Thank you for the fav. I love clouds. I have always been a cloud watcher. I love the shapes they change before my eyes. I often wonder what the clouds are made of. What they look lie inside. Thank you. Enjoy your evening my friend. Hugs always. xxx Darlene
Date: 7/21/2022 8:47:00 AM
Dear Darlene, such a creative, a mystic writing! You observe and embrace nature in a way many people are not capable of. Love this poem - To my Faves, Dear Poet.
Login to Reply
De Beaulieu Avatar
Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/21/2022 10:07:00 AM
Hello Mala, thank you for the lovely comment. Yes Mala I do embrace nature. I do love the clouds. Thank you for the fav.Love, & Friendship, Darlene
Date: 7/13/2022 11:44:00 PM
I love clouds my dear friend Darlene and I love your creative poem a lot.Clouds change in forms and colors and that's make it one of the most wonderful kinds of nature. Thanks a lot for sharing. I enjoyed so much. God bless you always. Hugs
Login to Reply
De Beaulieu Avatar
Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/14/2022 4:27:00 AM
Hello Len my friend, I love clouds to. I enjoy to see the clouds change shapes in front of my eyes. he lovely comment. Clouds change forms and it is wonderful nature. God bless Hugs.
Date: 7/12/2022 5:06:00 PM
Hello Darlene, I have also been fascinated by clouds, especially their shapes and colors. Your poem is so thought provoking and nicely written. I have seen some fantastic cloud shapes! Hugs. :)
Login to Reply
De Beaulieu Avatar
Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/13/2022 4:45:00 AM
Hello Evelyn, Evelyn, I also have seen fascinating shapes of clouds. I am always looking at the shapes of clouds. Once i saw a pink color cloud. Hugs. Darlene
Date: 7/11/2022 7:57:00 AM
Clouds are magic to me. I just accept them as is. Made by the Lord. You can use a search engine to learn about clouds but I just enjoy them like flowers. Love, Panagiota xxx
Login to Reply
De Beaulieu Avatar
Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/11/2022 10:35:00 AM
Hello Pananagiota, I enjoy the clouds in any shapes they are in. I think I will just enjoy the clouds the way they are.Love, Darlene xxx
Date: 7/7/2022 3:57:00 PM
Nice imagery, Darlene. Lots of questions to think about in your cloud poem. :-) Hugs, Bill
Login to Reply
De Beaulieu Avatar
Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/10/2022 4:27:00 AM
Hello Bill, I have always wondered about clouds. Your poetess friend. Darlene Hugs.
Date: 7/7/2022 10:23:00 AM
.. the color is light pink... and I think it's soft as cotton ... nice to sleep on ... lovely poem, Darlene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Login to Reply
De Beaulieu Avatar
Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/7/2022 2:51:00 PM
Hello Sunshine Smile, This is how i vision the clouds to be also. Hugs
Date: 7/7/2022 4:58:00 AM
Hello Mrs.Darlene a nice poem!! God bless you!!
Login to Reply
De Beaulieu Avatar
Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/7/2022 10:15:00 AM
Hello Mulu, So nice to see you here. Thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your day my friend.
Date: 7/4/2022 12:36:00 PM
I too think clouds, but oddly never about How their shapes, which I love are made. Lady, I admire your mind! A very nice work here. xox
Login to Reply
De Beaulieu Avatar
Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/4/2022 4:06:00 PM
Hello Sally Eslinger, Sally clouds has fascinated me for a very long time. I love the shapes they change often. Hugs.Thank you for the lovely comment. Hugs.
Date: 7/4/2022 6:39:00 AM
Even I sometimes ponder about clouds...One of the best creative piece of God!
Login to Reply
De Beaulieu Avatar
Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/4/2022 10:39:00 AM
Hello Komal Walimbe yes clouds are the creative of God. Clouds are beautiful in any shape. Hugs.
Date: 7/3/2022 11:46:00 AM
But the view ABOVE the clouds is more memorable! Aloha!
Login to Reply
De Beaulieu Avatar
Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/3/2022 4:52:00 PM
Hello Rico, yes the view above the clouds is more beautiful. I agree. Aloha! Darlene.
Date: 7/2/2022 6:28:00 PM
Great pondering! I was asking my 7 year old grandson, before the fireworks, what colors he saw in the clouds. His answers amaze me. I read him a little poetry too :)
Login to Reply
De Beaulieu Avatar
Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/3/2022 11:44:00 AM
Hello Kim, thank you Kim, Now you have me wondering what the colors were that he had seen. I can picture your granson listening to the poem you read to him. Hugs.

Book: Reflection on the Important Things