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Inside of Me

inside of me there's a girl you do not see she's nice, friendly, and talented but she'll never be me she can "walk the walk" and "talk the talk" but she's not really me trapped, and alone she will not be freed she's not me and never will be trapped inside she will hide like an bird that can't fly she's trapped forever never to be released by me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 4/9/2016 9:20:00 AM
Autumn, you have a lot of talent! You should spent your time honing your skills, who knows you might be the next Emily Dickinson! Your poems are technically sound, good phrasing and rhyme scheme. Keep posting. Peace young lady:)
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