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Inside My Head

How quiet the mind, when memories flow. Moving like leaves scattered by time's wind. This landscape where visions come and go, Leave fragments of deeds you can't rescind. How loud the mind when the heart remembers, And dances with pictures of pretty faces. The cold chill of lost love's dying embers, As each year further silently erases. How still the moment, when the mind's engaged, And allowed to travel through time and place. Finally understand, when you have aged, That all your memories scars leave their trace. To see death approach with its quiet hands, Find comfort in yesterday's shifting sands. 9/15/15

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Date: 2/7/2020 10:58:00 PM
Frederic, Congratulations! Such wonderful images and meter.
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Date: 9/28/2015 10:33:00 PM
Frederic, congrats on your wonderful win. Love SKAT
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Date: 9/28/2015 12:34:00 AM
Congrats on ur superb win with this awesome write Frederic!
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Date: 9/27/2015 9:21:00 AM
Nicely written and congrats Frederic!
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Date: 9/27/2015 9:15:00 AM
Congrats on your win Frederic!
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Date: 9/27/2015 12:52:00 AM
I knew this would do well, and return with my congratulations. Well done, Frederic. Regards, Viv
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Date: 9/26/2015 10:44:00 PM
Frederic, congratulations on your win!!! :~) Wonderful write!
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Date: 9/26/2015 3:07:00 PM
Frederic, the idea of death approaching with quiet hands.....a peaceful ending to a full and memory filled life....Thanks for entering this wonderful Sonnet in the contest
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Frederic Parker
Date: 9/27/2015 3:00:00 PM
Thank you for the kindness
Date: 9/16/2015 10:35:00 PM
wise and wonderful words, Frederic, my fellow sonneteer!
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Date: 9/16/2015 2:33:00 PM
through reveries, we warm our days... sweet delight of a piece, frederick... blessed to have read you.. huggs
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Date: 9/16/2015 1:32:00 AM
This will do well, I'm sure, Frederic. A beautiful piece, and a fave for me, many thanks for that. Regards, Viv
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