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Inside My Eyes

A Poets eyes are small windows that don't hide... Easily seeing out but a blur to see what's inside... The view from a distance might be one of dispair... Yet behind those shades sits a dreamer that is rare... The walls on the outside are splashed with lovely colors... While the inside has tangled words and see through covers... With transparent letters that twist into concrete phrases... They are now free to stand alone and above a poetic haze...

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Diana Mohammed

Date: 4/29/2012 5:48:00 PM

Wow!!... I'm getting tired of my first reaction on reading your poems...I'll have to think of something else!!(laugh).. You're a great writer Michael...Love Diana

George Aul

Date: 2/8/2012 11:16:00 AM

Congrats on a very true poem......George

Wilma Neels

Date: 2/7/2012 1:39:00 PM

This is a beauty Michael.. Love the descriptions, hope your Tuesday is a great one.. Congrats on the article in the paper.. Stunning pic of you and Rosanna ;) love Wilma

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/7/2012 7:32:00 AM

Congratulations to you on your win in Brian Strand 's "Whatever Again" contest Michael. Love, Carol

Ralph Taylor

Date: 2/6/2012 2:31:00 PM

Congrats, Michael. Great win. Nice going. Enjoyed. Best to you and yours. Ralph

Bob Quigley

Date: 2/5/2012 10:03:00 PM

You are right about poets being dreamers. I think we all have a little bit of that. Congratulations on your win Michael

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/5/2012 10:00:00 PM

Congrats Michael luv on a wonderful win for this charming writer.. and oh ..celebrate the win for our GMEN.. wow we sure woke up Italy .. with all our cheering andf partying tonight.. well this morning too... Ron is taking off today.. snow in Rome but not too much.. will be all gone.. how was trip to Florida? yeah.. hooray.. bravo and Eli MVP.. wow.. J.G. forver and always luv..xoxo.. NY rocks..

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 2/5/2012 9:14:00 PM

A perfect description of a poet! I love it. Congrats on your win. Blessings, Rhonda

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/3/2012 10:28:00 PM

such incredible lines describing the poet to perfection Michael luv.. a piece of u mingling with a piece of each of us here.. our creative spirits blending .. J.G. and W.K. soaring forever ..xoxo..

Tracy Edwards

Date: 2/1/2012 2:46:00 AM

Words of a true poet.. so lovely Michael xxx

Dinda Minardi

Date: 1/31/2012 7:14:00 AM

I really love this, Michael. Such a great words to describe your own :) I hope you're doing great now.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/30/2012 1:59:00 AM

such good use of diction and languid images that make any poet blush with pride... write on,michael... i like the soft feel of this!;) huggs!

Shirley Long

Date: 1/29/2012 3:24:00 PM

This is a wonderful way to describe a poet. I loved your poem.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/29/2012 12:30:00 PM

What wonderful poetry you all are sharing today. I enjoyed reading yours Michael. Hope the coming week finds you in good health and your life full of joy and inspiration. Love, Carol