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Inside I'M Dying

Inside These walls we dance To the rhythm Of sweet romance I'm Held tight in your embrace Staring into your eyes, darling Can't you feel my heart race Dying To let inhibitions fall And say what I feel "One day, we'll have it all"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/27/2012 3:21:00 PM
Well written dear poet. This is a gem.
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Date: 4/27/2012 2:53:00 PM
I love this piece Rachel!! hugs INK-U-SCRIPT
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Date: 4/27/2012 2:43:00 PM
Smile ~ You know the thing about beautiful roses, dear beautiful Rachel ~ Their fragrance becomes so much sweeter, once they die * Smile, You are sooo beautiful ~ My love, Always, John!:) ~
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Date: 4/27/2012 2:33:00 PM
This poem impress me, well written Rachel. Have a lovely weekend. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 4/27/2012 2:30:00 PM
I can feel the love in this beautiful piece
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