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Inside Her Walls

Inside her walls, no one hears her cries, another soldier, makes time to write. A decision she made, while still in high school, to do something worthy, keeping her heart so true. Now far away, in a lonely place, she sits,and writes, to her family in the states. Trained, and conditioned, to withstand the worst, sometimes very hard, and her body hurts. The flag is her purpose, and for everything it stands, freedom, for every woman, and man. Faithfully, and determined, to do her best, life as a soldier, her daily test. She is a survivor, this is what she chose, not dancing all night, and fancy clothes. As she seals the envelope, she gives it a kiss, for she knows in her heart, there are always risk. Inside her walls, no one hears her cries, another soldier, makes time to write.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/25/2009 8:24:00 AM
No one knows the apin that resides in those walls. The secrets and quiet cries that are not shared...this is a strong piece that provokes my mind. Wonderfully written. Love, Chris.
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Date: 1/24/2009 8:01:00 PM
Nice tribute to all those who sacrifice so much to bring freedom and safety to the world. Fitting title. Blessings to you for sharing this poem with us. Karen
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Date: 1/24/2009 6:27:00 PM
Love this poem slash short story. A womens husband being away at war I amagine can be really hard, but this letter of poetry really hits where it counts. enjoyed reading it and have a blessed day.
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Date: 1/23/2009 8:20:00 PM
love this poem, its absolutly great. its sad but so true. very well penned - love and peac james
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Date: 1/23/2009 4:46:00 PM
It is a sad thing, the price called freedom. All we can do is pray that God keeps them safe until they return. GOD BLESS THEM ALL!!! Ron
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Date: 1/23/2009 1:38:00 PM
Christy, is this a song? I think it should be. Your heart and talent knows no limits. I love this. Love you too, Shar
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Date: 1/23/2009 8:46:00 AM
Sad and real...a heart breaking poem, Christy. Well done....Love, Carrie
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Date: 1/23/2009 7:14:00 AM
The price of freedom is very expensive. People used to understand that and appreciate it. Well done Christy
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Date: 1/23/2009 6:25:00 AM
Hi Christy - I just loved this write - It shows the strength and the tenderness of the subject in a clear and definitive manor - Well done Christy - God Bless, MJ
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