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Your heart is as cold as ice Your words cut like knives You swear you're an honest man But your words are dry like sand Manipulation is your game Deception is your name You need the world to see this image you portray But in my eyes the truth is on display You cannot fool my mind with your words tuned so fine I see through to the truth Which is why you cut me loose So cherish the ones you can deceive You need their validation to proceed But at night when your thoughts are alone You'll realize inside you're as empty as this poem

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/13/2016 11:07:00 PM
erin, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 8/11/2015 4:38:00 AM
- A great poem ! - With smiles and joy I welcome you to P-Soup, Erin :) - Hope you will find this poem page interesting and post many more poems in the future - Have a great experience together here with us in "the poems world" - I wish you every success - // Anne-Lise :)
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Erin Seedhouse
Date: 8/18/2015 4:43:00 PM
Thank you for your words, I am enjoying this site so far :)
Date: 8/8/2015 12:41:00 AM
Hi Erin, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Erin Seedhouse
Date: 8/18/2015 4:44:00 PM
You guys are very welcoming thank you :)
Date: 8/8/2015 12:26:00 AM
whoever this is sounds like a womanizer. It's good you've parted ways. The mood is well expressed in your poem. Good job -JT
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Erin Seedhouse
Date: 8/18/2015 4:45:00 PM
I agree on the parting ways part too. Thank you so much
Date: 8/7/2015 11:39:00 PM
Erin, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Erin Seedhouse
Date: 8/18/2015 4:48:00 PM
Thank you. I Havent had a lot of time to submit a new entry but I will soon. Cant wait to enjoy everybody's work.

Book: Shattered Sighs