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Inseperable

their love is timeless flows easy like quiet streams adjust to each season two beautiful hearts engraved from one pattern existing betwixt hearts swapped forever sealed undeniable ying yang inseperable ~*~ This is for folks like me who dream : ) For: Linda's "Special Sentimental Senryu" Contest

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/24/2011 10:47:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's contest "Special Sentimental Senryu". Long list of winners so glad to see your name among them Annalise. Love, Carol

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 2/18/2011 4:56:00 AM

Congrats my dear Poet friend...!!! wondeful write...always Michael

Dr Hitendra Mehta

Date: 2/18/2011 12:08:00 AM

Many Congrats Annalise for big win in Linda's contest thru' this creative piece. Luv & Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta

Elaine George

Date: 2/17/2011 11:45:00 PM

Beautiful Senryu, dear Annailse. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 2/17/2011 4:47:00 PM

I guess that would say it all Annalise. Congrats on the nise dream and the poem too .. and thanks

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/17/2011 2:03:00 PM

YOu tell alout yourself in this string of poems. Congrats on your win!

Kash Poet

Date: 2/17/2011 11:27:00 AM

Wonderful write Annalise!Congrats on your big win---kashinath

Wilma Neels

Date: 2/17/2011 9:51:00 AM

It's quite a nice feeling to dream Annalise, real beauty you have here.. Congratulations on your win in Linda's contest, much love Wilma

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 2/17/2011 9:50:00 AM

Hello Annalise, There love is timeless, love the beginning and ending of this most beautiful work. Congratulations on your win my dear Lov, Shar

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/16/2011 9:00:00 PM

incredible, anna!! APPLAUSE for the super win with huggs! :) nette

Tahera Mannan

Date: 2/16/2011 7:53:00 PM

Lovely bonding. Many congrats for this huge win.

John Freeman

Date: 2/16/2011 7:14:00 PM

Annalise, Congratulations on your worthy poem's honored place. Agape, Moses

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/16/2011 6:42:00 PM

Three very nicely written senryu entries, Annalise. Congratulations on winning with them in Linda's contest.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/16/2011 5:56:00 PM

Congratulations on the fifth place win in the contest of Linda, Annalise

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/16/2011 5:35:00 PM

Congrats Annalise on your success in my contest luv.. thankxx for your constant support always...

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 2/3/2011 1:57:00 PM

A beautiful write, and such warmth in your words...luv Michael

Christopher Marcum

Date: 2/3/2011 1:22:00 PM

smile -- aside from "Heavens Love;" this, is the most beautiful love of all which, your beauty, has thus painted amid such wonderfully lovely colours my dear -- most, spend their lifetimes within this world but dreaming of, such a beautiful love to embrace their precious hearts yet, forevermore -- again, a masterpiece of a fave; brushed in brilliant brights, sweet cardinal red; beautiful -- love, christopher ~

Kib G

Date: 2/3/2011 12:49:00 PM

I feel passion in those words.......Hey nowwwwww...lol...I like

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/3/2011 12:13:00 PM

Nice tale of two beautiful hearts undeniable ying yang, nice expressions, Annalise,