Insanity

Welcome to my private hell come in please have a seat the view is always changing in my world of self defeat Complete with both the demons and darkness of the night that holds my thinking hostage well hidden from the light Come join my web of delusion there's always room for more I'm fatal to your sanity too late, I've locked the door.

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Skat A

Date: 4/19/2016 11:30:00 PM

Pamela Penn, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Manmath Dalei

Date: 4/19/2016 6:40:00 AM

Hi Pamela, Nice first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Wish u a successful journey ahead........hugs

Tim Smith

Date: 4/18/2016 8:58:00 PM

Very nice first post PP. We all seem to be held hostage from time to time. Keep penning and let it out...Tim

Moon Flower

Date: 4/18/2016 8:11:00 PM

That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Pamela. :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/18/2016 6:34:00 PM

Pamela, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Robert Pettit

Date: 4/18/2016 4:28:00 PM

Welcome to this site. I know you will like it here. This is a great entry for a start here. Keep up the good work and you will be getting a lot of attention from others.

Pamela Penn
Date: 4/18/2016 4:31:00 PM

Oh wow, thank you sooo much for the encouragement!!!!!