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Insanity

I let this man into my life Narcissistic, pompous, preening Speaking foolishly of things unfair As I didn't get the meaning Nothing spoken but hot air Incredible enormous vanity Things said I couldn't bear You know it was INSANITY

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Bongani Zungu

Date: 9/17/2014 4:45:00 AM

Wow! this is an awsome piece.

Carmen Penchi Aka Sunshine
Date: 9/17/2014 6:24:00 AM

Thank you, I appreciate the feedback!

Keith Baucum

Date: 9/11/2014 11:03:00 AM

You are a very fantastic poet.

Carmen Penchi Aka Sunshine
Date: 9/17/2014 6:24:00 AM

Thank you, I appreciate the feedback!

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 9/7/2014 11:24:00 AM

Your man's insanity ? or yours? Your depression or his behavioral problems? Counseling ?Much deception huh! Liked it CARMEN. Hug! RAJAT

Carmen Penchi Aka Sunshine
Date: 9/7/2014 8:33:00 PM

his insanity, his problems... i'm done with that ! LOL for now until the next crazy comes along LOLOL

Christine Costello

Date: 9/6/2014 11:49:00 AM

How we women do engage in some insanity!! This was clever, and it read like a tune- I enjoyed it. :-) Christine

Carmen Penchi Aka Sunshine
Date: 9/6/2014 8:40:00 PM

Thank you.