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Insanity

They met in a neighborhood bar He said he did not live very far So handsome and so very polite They spent hours talking tonight Said he'd been alone for a while She thought, what a great smile Later she left with him willingly The time was half past three Entering his door, she felt a chill To late for now, he is set for the kill He tied her down on a huge bed Panic now runs through her head A sadistic smile is upon his face She will be gone without a trace My God, is that a razor in his hand And he is wearing a wedding band She did not see the ring before His first cut he calls her Whore In his eyes he see's his wife once more Her cheating heart he must erase Each time he kills he see's her face So he kills her again and again Tonight his killings rise to ten Later he will sit and sharpen his knife In his insanity you were his wife. 3/3/2012

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/8/2014 7:16:00 PM
WOW! What a poem. To think that this could really happen, or has happened, gives me the chills. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla
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Date: 3/3/2012 7:00:00 AM
Wow!! To the point and bearing with the realities of insane murders in today's modern life...! Enjoyed reading it! Anoucheka
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Carol Ann Crowley
Date: 3/3/2012 8:18:00 AM
thank for your review greatly appreciated carolann113

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