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Insane Seer

insidiously tangled in hope of a divine touch only mad (vertical haiku)

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Renee Kelly

Date: 4/5/2011 7:06:00 AM

Carol - I was looking up another type of poetry and came across "vertical haiku": http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Haiku_in_English And thanks for stopping by to read it!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/5/2011 6:39:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your poetry Renee. I enjoyed reading it and hope to read more of it soon. May you always find the inspiration to continue with your writing endeavors. I have looked everywhere and do not see this as a form of Haiku anywhere. Can you tell me where you found it? Love, Carol

Renee Kelly

Date: 4/4/2011 6:54:00 PM

I don't think you are restricted on how many syllables per line, Mehta. This one is: 1st line: 7 2nd line: 3 3rd line: 4 4th line: 3 As long as the total is 17 and it's split up into 4 lines, it's all good :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/4/2011 6:51:00 PM

Oh, nice this is the second one I am reading. Please let me know the syllable in each line