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Innocense Lost

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Innocense Lost

                                              Garden paradise
                                         Brushstroke vision of Eden
                                               innocense lost

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  1. Date: 1/12/2013 5:07:00 PM
    A full story in 5-7-5. Takes talent and imagination. Well done on a beautifully portrayed vision of this scene

  1. Date: 1/8/2013 6:34:00 PM
    Very descriptive haiku... Enjoyed !!

  1. Date: 8/11/2012 1:25:00 PM

  1. Date: 7/26/2012 8:57:00 AM
    nice poem I still thing the heart remains a child x david scott

  1. Date: 7/22/2012 9:55:00 PM
    Reminds me of the first few chapters of the Book of Genesis in the Old Testament. Very descriptive haiku.

  1. Date: 7/21/2012 5:33:00 AM
    Lori....very good written. - oxox love Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 7/19/2012 12:50:00 PM
    Lori, you are very right. There we lost the whole essence of man even in absence. Cheers.

  1. Date: 7/17/2012 2:50:00 PM
    Such a great way to describe the loss that affects us all. Elizabeth

  1. Date: 7/15/2012 9:48:00 PM
    I love that middle line, brushstroke vision of Eden!