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Innocence

A boy stands at the window, showing his sister how to breathe fog onto the glass, leaving tiny handprints that linger and slowly disappear. Across an ocean, the world is ending.

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Date: 3/2/2022 8:06:00 AM
Innocence versus tragedy. I pray this battle comes to an end soon. Nice poem with so much emotion!
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Date: 2/28/2022 10:20:00 AM
Wonderful to see your perspective again Heather...two sides here--love and hate--hope he draws a heart into the fog--hope we are responsible for a world they can cherish--seems to be a never ending hope--generation to generation--so I pray that the worst battles they ever face are sibling ones!
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