Innocence

I am man I am love I am man I am evil I am man I may smile I may cry I may save you I may die I am the result Of a couples dream I am life Or so it would seem I can do a great many things I am just one Of the father of all kings I am the life, love and birth I am the child to assess it’s worth I am the prayer I am the payer I am the slayer I am the hopeful I am the dreamer I am he…………. Who understands Eric (and sometimes not)

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/16/2010 2:02:00 PM

Well..you know I thought you were going to say JC? LOL I believe God is within our cells as well as our Universe..so it's OK! Light & Love

Milton Toran

Date: 1/15/2010 8:19:00 AM

Bold and unique! Congratulations!---Milt

Sue Mason

Date: 1/12/2010 11:41:00 AM

LOL ... love the last line here. Wonderfully written!!

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 1/12/2010 5:06:00 AM

Every one of us brings something special to the table, and each one something different. Together we are all those things and more. Congrats on the feature. There is a depth to this one. Vince

Eric Nolan

Date: 1/11/2010 3:44:00 PM

Thank you all very much for your comments I really appreciate it very much, it means a great deal to me. Thank you

James Fraser

Date: 1/11/2010 1:48:00 PM

Many congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Eric >> James

Elaine George

Date: 1/11/2010 8:25:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your thoughts through your poetry, ERic and sometimes not. Lainie

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/11/2010 4:47:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Eric. Love, Carol

John Freeman

Date: 1/10/2010 7:21:00 PM

Congratulations on your well deserved featured Poem. Eric. Sincerely, Moses

P Sheart

Date: 1/10/2010 3:57:00 PM

Hi Eric,Congrats on your amazing feature poem this week! Very well deserved as always. Truly enjoyed reading. Happy New Year! Love Light Patty

Date: 1/10/2010 1:23:00 PM

Thought provoking. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen

Janette Fisher

Date: 1/10/2010 11:51:00 AM

Eric - another wonderful piece. Many congrats on being featured this week. Rgds Janette

Eric Nolan

Date: 11/29/2009 9:36:00 AM

As always thank you for your words, I appreciate it very much.

James Fraser

Date: 11/29/2009 9:32:00 AM

And men we are Eric, nice write >> James

Yoni Dvorkis

Date: 3/6/2009 10:56:00 AM

This one is very strong. It reads very stream of consciousness.

Eric Nolan

Date: 1/9/2009 6:02:00 AM

Thank you Laurie I really appreciate your feedback it means alot to me.

Laurie Ginn

Date: 1/9/2009 4:03:00 AM

THis is great Eric, a pleasure to read. Laurie

Eric Nolan

Date: 1/8/2009 9:07:00 PM

Thank you Tyesha I take that as a great compliment coming from you as you are also a truly talented individual yourself. I have never read anyone else's poetry I have enjoyed more. I myself just joined the Soup this evening and I am glad I did, I never had a clue what I was missing. Looking forward to reading more of your work.

Tyesha Ehigiator

Date: 1/8/2009 9:00:00 PM

Wow, Eric..this one took my breath away, it was truly inspiring and passionately expressed, you have a great gift, continue to express it to the fullest and share as much as you can with others, Thank you so much for all the wonderful comments and feedback, I truly appreciate it, and you are most welcome, I've been on Poetry soup for less than two weeks but it has been such a blessing for me,I am discovering all the wonderful gifts of the written soul and all the stories untold.God Bless, tyesha