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Inner Me

With a cup of raindrops I begin anew...
Lightly dropped on the floor, till my words grew...

Small petals peak out from under the light...
With only small sounds heard as we drift into night...

Morning arrives with a buffet of thoughts to write down...
They are all consumed slow as a daydream stays around...

The pages now covered in a poetic landscape outlined by the sea...
There I sit and gaze at a portrait of my inner me...

Copyright © Michael J. Falotico

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  1. Date: 7/30/2012 7:27:00 AM
    Dear Michael, I've posted your poem on my short poetry blog, You can visit it and comment on other English poems!

  1. Date: 7/19/2012 4:40:00 AM
    it's kind of masterpiece, Michael. I wish I had more time now to read more of your poems! Can I post it on my poetical blog (Both in Greek and English, you can comment on the English poems). I'll read more of your texts later. I'm glad I came across your poetry!

  1. Date: 7/17/2012 4:41:00 PM
    Nice I have found out your secret to writing ggggrrrrreeeeaaaatttt poetry...gwendolen

  1. Date: 7/17/2012 5:36:00 AM
    Imagery in this great write you`ve penned here,its beyond beautiful Michael.Superb reflection of the inner you.Written with your heart and soul,you can`t go wrong there my brother! Have a great Thuesday across the Soup bowl..Arild

  1. Date: 7/16/2012 10:17:00 AM
    what an artistic write! from just a few raindrops...beautiful! Would it work for me too? I think my inner landscape would be much u look lovely :)

  1. Date: 7/15/2012 10:44:00 PM
    Michael, nice meeting the inner you. Enjoyed.

  1. Date: 7/15/2012 12:41:00 PM
    I just love the ending MJF, this is a beauty.. I also want from the yummy food :D lol love & hugs CTH

  1. Date: 7/14/2012 4:40:00 PM
    Great work..Enjoyed reading this eve..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara

  1. Date: 7/14/2012 5:40:00 AM
    Superb writing, delightful rhyme!

  1. Date: 7/13/2012 8:37:00 PM
    Beautiful landscapes penned Michael, enjoyed your verse and thank you for your kind visit, Vie

  1. Date: 7/13/2012 8:29:00 PM
    an adventure of writing enjoyment..that buffet of thoughts sounds so intriguing Michael luv.. so happy u have returned.. hope all is going well luv.. JG still dealing with headaches from concussion last week so good ole Ron typing once again till I am able to be on next week myself.. hugs and smoochies to u too.. xoxo

  1. Date: 7/13/2012 5:32:00 PM
    I enjoyed reading your poem, Michael. I love the images of "a cup of raindrops", "a buffet of thoughts" and "a portrait of my inner me" Great write. Love, Kim

  1. Date: 7/13/2012 3:45:00 PM
    Wow, you sure can paint a beautiful picture with your words! I really enjoyed your creative poem! This enlightened me a lot this afternoon! I might just write a poem from the inspiration I gained from your write, thanks! Great Work!!