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Inner Emptiness and Internal Tears

To have an empty heart For nearly thirteen years Inner emptiness Many internal tears Music is my Savior And now poetry has come along I know where i want to be It's where my empty heart belongs I have thirteen years in storage Of cuddles and company Kisses and strong feelings For someone to share with thee If i had wings like an Eagle I'd be in flight today Over a blue stretch of water To my future i would say I'm just a simple man From a distant Scottish Clan Please take me in your arms And be the man i can Take me to your bosom And let me hear your heart To spark my ignition Leave thirteen years in the dark Take me by the hand Hold me close and tight Let me lie beside you Every single night To wake up beside you Knowing i can touch and kiss To know there's love tomorrow Is this Highlanders only wish

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/25/2014 1:15:00 AM
the greatest glory of man is not in never falling but in rising everytime we fall.... i too have fallen many times... there are times before i thought of leaving home... amd worst committing suicide.... but when i do such i feel ashamed nd scared.. hence what i do is just let it all out by crying and praying.. and somehow still to find the way to stand again.. with every stand its true I know in myself ive become better...
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James Fraser
Date: 10/25/2014 8:06:00 AM
We appear to have lived the same thoughts Eloisa, all of them, James :(
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/25/2014 1:17:00 AM
this a poem clogged with so much yearning.. :) well you not alone as I too still am waiting for tjat someone... :)
Date: 8/26/2009 4:47:00 AM
I feel your pain of putting your inner being on hold for some reason or other and needing to be able to let it surface again. In the fourth stanza lines one and two. To rise on those wings be over the weight of the world lifts me. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 6/21/2009 7:58:00 AM
You have a way of molding some beautiful line filled with honesty and hope.
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Date: 6/21/2009 2:43:00 AM
James, You have a way with words. This is a very sweet love poem. Are you expanding your skills? Or is this poem personal? Whatever it is, it is very expressive and compelling. Always, Dane
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Date: 6/20/2009 11:17:00 PM
Highlander!!!!.........I hope and pray that you'll find your love not tommorow, But TODAY!!!!.......I love this one....really nice....Believe me, I read this for more that 5 or 6 times.......Really Nice!!!.. Keep smilin! > Crystal
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Date: 6/20/2009 3:59:00 PM
There can be love tomorrow, but you'll have to hop on that plane and step out of the dark. You take us on a journey of the heart and evoke romance for the one who lies beside you. You are an extraordinary man, James, with so much love to give. Beautiful poem! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/20/2009 3:55:00 PM
I totally Connect to the whole Music and poetry Part.Rockinxx Xo=)
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