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Ink

my soul bleeds black ink feelings spill onto paper ~~ ink flows with my tears

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Gert W. Knop
Date: 4/11/2011 3:59:00 AM
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Wow, what a great Senryu, Francine! ...ink flows with my tears!!! Enjoyed the read this early Monday afternoon...Gert:)
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 4/5/2011 8:30:00 PM
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Soup mail, Francine
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/4/2011 9:39:00 PM
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You did magnificently with this little senryu!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/4/2011 5:43:00 AM
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Very creative and descriptive work...Enjoyed reading today...Thanks for the review..Sara
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Harry Horsman
Date: 4/3/2011 11:36:00 PM
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In the hand or in the eye, your feelings Francine, are recorded wonderfully here on soup. awesome. Harry
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 4/3/2011 12:29:00 PM
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Like the way the ink represents the emotions in your soul, Francine. Only someone with deep feelings could express themselves this way. Excellent poem! Love, Carolyn
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Michael Jordan
Date: 4/3/2011 4:59:00 AM
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Francine, this says it all and then some. Out standing senryu, a fav, mj
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Linda-Marie Sweetheart
Date: 4/2/2011 7:56:00 PM
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Emotionally charged piece Francine .. the tear speaks it's personality in your lovely lines..good luck in the contest by HG.. and thankxx for enjoying my Counterpart entry .. this is a super fun contest luv..
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Dana Smith
Date: 4/2/2011 4:18:00 PM
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I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today and I'm looking forward to reading more. Take care of yourself. Dana'lynn
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James Fraser
Date: 4/2/2011 8:28:00 AM
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Sad shortie Francine, beautifully written. Have a lovely weekend....:)
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Nette Onclaud
Date: 4/2/2011 12:06:00 AM
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very descriptive and unique, francine... love te sad yet beautiful feel of this piece.. winning wishes if for a contest..:) huggs, nette
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Doris Culverhouse
Date: 4/1/2011 7:12:00 PM
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I thought that was from hypertattoism??
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